The Kidnapping of Kimberly Park
Kidnapped! Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Nope, no arguing with this dad. Those kidnappers had no idea what they were getting into. He obviously has some commando training of some sort. I bet the daughter is very grateful for the GPS at this point.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Nope, no arguing with this dad. Those kidnappers had no idea what they were getting into. He obviously has some commando training of some sort. I bet the daughter is very grateful for the GPS at this point.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Debi. I'm glad you liked my little offering.
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I see you won this one. I was hoping you would. It was exceptional.
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Thank you, Debi. Have yourself a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from Lisa Turcotte
An interesting read. Reminds me a little of Taken. The omniscient POV always makes stories a little difficult for me to get into. But, I do like the lesson on GPS tracking & safety!
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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An interesting read. Reminds me a little of Taken. The omniscient POV always makes stories a little difficult for me to get into. But, I do like the lesson on GPS tracking & safety!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks.
Comment from country ranch writer
This is a very good story and no one comes between and fathers love for his children he will hunt you down and kill you!he was smart enough to get his daughter back. She whispered to her dad I am glad you didn't is ten to me about the GPS!
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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This is a very good story and no one comes between and fathers love for his children he will hunt you down and kill you!he was smart enough to get his daughter back. She whispered to her dad I am glad you didn't is ten to me about the GPS!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review Country. Yes, I'm sure a dad would go to these extremes if his little girl was taken and he knew where to find her. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I liked the last line about arguing with her dad about putting the GPS tracking device on her phone. I thought you did well to write this within five hundred words and you captured the action and the urgency, from the moment when the kidnappers made the ransom demand, to when her father burst through. I thought your writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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I liked the last line about arguing with her dad about putting the GPS tracking device on her phone. I thought you did well to write this within five hundred words and you captured the action and the urgency, from the moment when the kidnappers made the ransom demand, to when her father burst through. I thought your writing flowed well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Jacob. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from oliver818
Nice story, I enjoyed it. It reminds me of the film Taken, just in fast forward. I enjoyed your descriptions, they are very evocative. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Nice story, I enjoyed it. It reminds me of the film Taken, just in fast forward. I enjoyed your descriptions, they are very evocative. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Oliver. I'm glad you liked the piece.
