Brilliant Rainbow
Inspired by hearing of a rainbow.16 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is really beautiful Patricia. The art is so lovely, so vivid. I enjoyed your description. The 9 lines and 2 rhythms is new to me. It seems to make the words stick in one's mind really well.
Thank you for the pleasure of reading this treasure!
Hope your day is going well.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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This is really beautiful Patricia. The art is so lovely, so vivid. I enjoyed your description. The 9 lines and 2 rhythms is new to me. It seems to make the words stick in one's mind really well.
Thank you for the pleasure of reading this treasure!
Hope your day is going well.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Janetsue
I have always loved rainbows and have seen a few double ones. Someone recently said they saw a triple one. I especially enjoy seeing then at the bottom of a waterfall when the sun hits the mist just right. This is a beautiful posting!
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I have always loved rainbows and have seen a few double ones. Someone recently said they saw a triple one. I especially enjoy seeing then at the bottom of a waterfall when the sun hits the mist just right. This is a beautiful posting!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your matching, artwork selection. Your description of the "colorful arch" and the use of rhymes is very effective. Literally "brilliant"! -Joan
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I relished your matching, artwork selection. Your description of the "colorful arch" and the use of rhymes is very effective. Literally "brilliant"! -Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The rainbows still amaze us and light up the sky despite the terror on the streets and the fear in our hearts Patricia, you brought the colours here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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The rainbows still amaze us and light up the sky despite the terror on the streets and the fear in our hearts Patricia, you brought the colours here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from jaded831
A rainbow after the storm, what a lovely sight to behold. Your poem is fitting especially now, we need to see the rainbows within this stormy pandemic. Like having loved ones close and just being alive.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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A rainbow after the storm, what a lovely sight to behold. Your poem is fitting especially now, we need to see the rainbows within this stormy pandemic. Like having loved ones close and just being alive.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Mistydawn
Rainbows are beautiful that's for sure. Aren't they a sign of a promise God made? My youngest daughter Tiffany was a sickly child, but it seemed that every time something good would happen her prognosis would improve there was a rainbow in the sky. She was nicknamed rainbow baby. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Rainbows are beautiful that's for sure. Aren't they a sign of a promise God made? My youngest daughter Tiffany was a sickly child, but it seemed that every time something good would happen her prognosis would improve there was a rainbow in the sky. She was nicknamed rainbow baby. Nicely done.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Rainbows are wonderful to see and each can outshine the other. Some are pale while others are brilliantly colored. Some seem to last longer than others, and some fade away quickly. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Rainbows are wonderful to see and each can outshine the other. Some are pale while others are brilliantly colored. Some seem to last longer than others, and some fade away quickly. Well done!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
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You're always welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the brilliant rainbow that appears in the sky when it rain and brings a wonderful message that we have a God to turn to when the storms are raging in our lives.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about the brilliant rainbow that appears in the sky when it rain and brings a wonderful message that we have a God to turn to when the storms are raging in our lives.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very colorful poem you have penned about the rainbow. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very colorful poem you have penned about the rainbow. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Colorful arch bridged across the rain, what a beautiful representation of the mighty Rainbow. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings..
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Colorful arch bridged across the rain, what a beautiful representation of the mighty Rainbow. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings..
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for your lovely review.