In Season's Trust ...
Synergy/Rhyming Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
In Season's Trust ...
by Susanjohn
Hello, Susan,
Beautiful thinking poem about nature and the seasons. I love the imagery and rhythm. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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In Season's Trust ...
by Susanjohn
Hello, Susan,
Beautiful thinking poem about nature and the seasons. I love the imagery and rhythm. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Gypsy! Thanks for reading and for the review! Much appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about nature trusting the seasons to come and go in time, but seasons sometimes like to play games and winter holds on to his reign a little longer.
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A very well-written rhyming poem about nature trusting the seasons to come and go in time, but seasons sometimes like to play games and winter holds on to his reign a little longer.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Thank you for reading and for the review Sandra, much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the internal rhyming and natures sentiments here Susan. Your poem is well written and your end rhymes well thought out and your poem has lots of magic within that give it movement and life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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I'm loving the internal rhyming and natures sentiments here Susan. Your poem is well written and your end rhymes well thought out and your poem has lots of magic within that give it movement and life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Sweet Dolly! Thank you kindly for this wonderful review AND 6 shiny stars. I came up with this form...maybe you'd like to try it sometime? ;-)
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You are most welcome, I have bookmarked your poem and maybe give the form a try if I can work it out! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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You are most welcome, I have bookmarked your poem and maybe give the form a try if I can work it out! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
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Oh I am positive you can :))
Comment from Margaret Bednar
creations callings intertwine. (creation's) ? I'm not a grammar-head so double check :)
Whew, those are a lot of rules to follow and yet you create a flowing woodland dance for us
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creations callings intertwine. (creation's) ? I'm not a grammar-head so double check :)
Whew, those are a lot of rules to follow and yet you create a flowing woodland dance for us
Comment Written 11-May-2020
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Corrected and thank you! Try it sometime, I'm sure you'll come up with something awesome.
Comment from June Sargent
This looks to be a very complicated format - but one I would like to try sometime. Your piece flowed so naturally and smoothly, while capturing the beauty and serenity of the woodlands. I enjoyed the sojourn into another time and place...
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This looks to be a very complicated format - but one I would like to try sometime. Your piece flowed so naturally and smoothly, while capturing the beauty and serenity of the woodlands. I enjoyed the sojourn into another time and place...
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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June, I came up with this form...I would love for you to try it! Thanks for reading and for the great review!
Comment from Joan E.
What a spectacular picture and poem describing the superb scene. Thank you for introducing me to the Synergy form as well--I enjoyed your rhymes and reversed repeats plus depiction of the changing seasons. Big cheers- Joan
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What a spectacular picture and poem describing the superb scene. Thank you for introducing me to the Synergy form as well--I enjoyed your rhymes and reversed repeats plus depiction of the changing seasons. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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6 stars! Thank you Joan, and thanks for reading!
Comment from Gloria ....
A most vivid and colourful pastoral, Susan. A most intricate form that you've written masterfully and shown us the seasonal shift ending in the howl of winter.
Excellent work and wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
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A most vivid and colourful pastoral, Susan. A most intricate form that you've written masterfully and shown us the seasonal shift ending in the howl of winter.
Excellent work and wishing you great luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you Gloria....so, I came up with this form. Would love to see you write something in it ;-) hint hint. Thanks for reading and for the lovely review!
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I really liked this. The images were good, and there was a great rhyming scheme to this. You really made this work out pretty well. Fantastic job with this.
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I really liked this. The images were good, and there was a great rhyming scheme to this. You really made this work out pretty well. Fantastic job with this.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Aw thanks for the great review!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great poem written with a unique form and rhyme scheme. I like how you tied in the different seasons with the animals. I like the phrase "earths liquid soul." Bill
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Great poem written with a unique form and rhyme scheme. I like how you tied in the different seasons with the animals. I like the phrase "earths liquid soul." Bill
Comment Written 10-May-2020
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Hi Bill, thanks for reading and taking the tiime to review!Much appreciated! :-)
Comment from Pamela Peridot
This is truly excellent work. The poet uses skillful imagery to bring the lines leaping off the page. I, the reader, feel truly immersed in this poem.
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This is truly excellent work. The poet uses skillful imagery to bring the lines leaping off the page. I, the reader, feel truly immersed in this poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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6 stars! Aw thank you! I am quite pleased you enjoyed this poem :-) Thanks again.
