Fantastical Reflections
It happened just like that... once upon a time48 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Awe - I adore this love poem to your husband (I assume this is non-fiction. Either way, I enjoyed your attention to meter. Love the rhyming words: unsurpassed/miscast
I wonder, do you need an "s" on turn? (our hair turn gray,)
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Awe - I adore this love poem to your husband (I assume this is non-fiction. Either way, I enjoyed your attention to meter. Love the rhyming words: unsurpassed/miscast
I wonder, do you need an "s" on turn? (our hair turn gray,)
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for your review and suggestion, but it is, indeed, spelled as meant. Appreciate your time. :) :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is such a beautiful reflection. Your rhyming and storytelling at the same time, all syncs very well. The art supplied hints at what is to come, which is a very apt portrayal.
'He still says I'm his everything, e'en as we age, our hair turn gray,
And I have never missed my wings for love's the magic in our days."
These words are heartfelt.
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This is such a beautiful reflection. Your rhyming and storytelling at the same time, all syncs very well. The art supplied hints at what is to come, which is a very apt portrayal.
'He still says I'm his everything, e'en as we age, our hair turn gray,
And I have never missed my wings for love's the magic in our days."
These words are heartfelt.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Rafe, for your awesome review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land -- those stars will hopefully light the way there - lol! :) Hopefully you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Stephen Force
Good story, well told, and tightly rhymed, and very well reflected. The story sounds like it could be biographical, it sounded like a coup de foudre moment but I didn't see any alcohol mentioned:). Really good poem, good luck.
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Good story, well told, and tightly rhymed, and very well reflected. The story sounds like it could be biographical, it sounded like a coup de foudre moment but I didn't see any alcohol mentioned:). Really good poem, good luck.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Naaahhh, total fantasy (that's my story and I'm stickin' to it!) Thank you so much, Steve, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a bit of a smile -- take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, sir!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette, this is a magical poem about love. I was totally swept away by its allure. Excellent work. I love the photo which augments the poem's charm. Best of luck in the contest,
Best wishes, Cindy
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Yvette, this is a magical poem about love. I was totally swept away by its allure. Excellent work. I love the photo which augments the poem's charm. Best of luck in the contest,
Best wishes, Cindy
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Cindy, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) So glad to have swept you away (wink, wink)... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
School's out, and you are as free as a bird! Yea! You have not lost any of your writing skills. This poem entry is perfect for the Share A Story In A Poem contest. Great good luck.
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School's out, and you are as free as a bird! Yea! You have not lost any of your writing skills. This poem entry is perfect for the Share A Story In A Poem contest. Great good luck.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hooray... and thank you, Rebecca, for such a wonderful compliment, my lady!! ;) :) Thanx also for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
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I always enjoy your writings!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A magical story Yvette and I enjoyed your rhyming and flow and most of all the sentiments here. A dreamy write.
Just one suggestion for you:
He still says I'm his everything, e'en as we age, our hair turn(s) gray,
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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A magical story Yvette and I enjoyed your rhyming and flow and most of all the sentiments here. A dreamy write.
Just one suggestion for you:
He still says I'm his everything, e'en as we age, our hair turn(s) gray,
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your suggestion and for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Hope you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Good grief woman, have mercy. Everyone is dishing out the romantic stuff these days and this is no exception. So sweet and endearing. I adore this one and much like my own story. I was robbed of bag and baggage by my sweet man. Hair of white and love so sweet....
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
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Good grief woman, have mercy. Everyone is dishing out the romantic stuff these days and this is no exception. So sweet and endearing. I adore this one and much like my own story. I was robbed of bag and baggage by my sweet man. Hair of white and love so sweet....
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Sorry - don't know what's up with the crazy muses these days... gonna give them a rest, I think, and be back in a few days... ;) :) :) Thank you so much, Lady Sal, for your awesome review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land -- those stars will hopefully light the way there - lol! :) Glad to hear you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on completing the school year and letting your sentiments run free. My husband and I actually experienced this fairytale at a college reunion forty-eight years ago. We did not know each other in school, but were married four months later! Thanks for the rhymes and the memories. Best wishes in the Story Poem contest- Joan
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Congratulations on completing the school year and letting your sentiments run free. My husband and I actually experienced this fairytale at a college reunion forty-eight years ago. We did not know each other in school, but were married four months later! Thanks for the rhymes and the memories. Best wishes in the Story Poem contest- Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Marilyn! :) :) And oh my goodness - four months... it really was a fairy tale as you're still together!! ;) :) Thank you for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Glad you found a smile in this one... take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, my lady!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really lovely, Yvette. A fairy falls in love with a human man, in more ways than one, :)), and gives up her wings to be with him. That is such a lovely story in a poem, and I could imagine it in a prose novel. So romantic. Well done, my friend, this is a wonderful contest entry, and I wish you the very best of luck! :)) Sandra xxx
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That was really lovely, Yvette. A fairy falls in love with a human man, in more ways than one, :)), and gives up her wings to be with him. That is such a lovely story in a poem, and I could imagine it in a prose novel. So romantic. Well done, my friend, this is a wonderful contest entry, and I wish you the very best of luck! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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No more prose suggestions - lol!! ;) Gonna take a few days for the fantasy juices to get up to speed (and the brain to rest after the craziness of the school year) and then I'll be back in business.... just maybe we could get my husband out of the house again fulltime - lol!! ;) :) Take care, my lady!! ;)
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Oh, I was going to, I'd started writing Garden ...., and then thought you might swim the pond and come and pop my nose if I kept on at you again!!! LOL! I have the same husband problem, bless them! Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Have a lovely day!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette. Great story in a poem. The narrative combines many events in the life of a person in love. The poem concludes with a happy ending that starts in youth and finishes in the golden age. Well told story.
Good luck in the contest.
Z :~)))
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hey Yvette. Great story in a poem. The narrative combines many events in the life of a person in love. The poem concludes with a happy ending that starts in youth and finishes in the golden age. Well told story.
Good luck in the contest.
Z :~)))
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Z, for your review on the blonde's crazy step back into fantasy land! :) Take care of you and enjoy the week ahead, sir!! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome.
Da Z :~)))
