Comment from A. Louise Robertson

Excellent

I love the artwork and the entire "presentation" of this piece. You followed the rules perfectly for this cinquain. It is a beautiful reminder that we are saved because of His sacrifice. Thank you very much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Blessings

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello unknown writer of a your spiritual thoughts of
We are bought with a price...by Our savior Jesus Christ gift of external life when He forgave our sins in your
Cinquain writing prompt entry.
Gert

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Blessings...

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Jesus our Savior

Hello my friend

Nice entry for the Write a Cinquain writing prompt contest. I don't know the Cinquain form very well but to me you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Blessings...

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice work. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Comment from Jeffrey Ford

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this truthful and amazing poem about the word of God. God is our Savior thank you for sharing this poem! It is very well written and I didn't see any grammar errors.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Comment from joycetreasures

Excellent

Hello,
I pray all is well with you during this pandemic. You wrote from a beautiful scripture, " Ye are bought with a price; be not ye the servants of men. 1 Corinthians 7:23 KJV." I love reading any poem with a biblical or spiritual context. This is a very powerful Cinquain with true words about our savior, Christ Jesus. I love your message, that Jesus suffered to bring all mankind closer to God. Well-done. Enjoyable and powerful spiritual read. I love your imagery. Thank you. Happy writing:-) Stay safe.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Stay safe and well.

Blessings...

reply by joycetreasures on 09-May-2020

You are welcome. Thanks

Comment from Vanny

Excellent

Jesus is our Savior. He is our everything. You are such a powerful writer with this poem. It speaks to me so deeply. You choose a strong background color that makes this image stand out .Thanks so much for sharing with us.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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Vanny,

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...

Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Great poem. There is a typo though. You have used the word "brought" instead of "bought", you might want to edit that. Otherwise, it is excellent. i love it. -January L.

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 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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January,

Thanks so much for your review and for bringing the typo to my attention.

Blessings...