Jesus
Lord and Savior38 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Jesus Our Saviour", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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"Jesus Our Saviour", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Duchess,
Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and very kind comments.
Blessings
Dear Anon,
you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless and stay free,
the Duchess
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Thi cinquain one could offer up as a prayer. The rules have been met as to syllable count. I liked that you have the repeated "f" sound at the end. Nothing to really fault as the rules have been met.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thi cinquain one could offer up as a prayer. The rules have been met as to syllable count. I liked that you have the repeated "f" sound at the end. Nothing to really fault as the rules have been met.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from l.raven
He loves us like no other...He died so we could live...
He forgives our sins...only to forgive again...and all He asks is for us to believe...have faith...I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written...God Bless...and good luck...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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He loves us like no other...He died so we could live...
He forgives our sins...only to forgive again...and all He asks is for us to believe...have faith...I love your poem...and love your picture...very nicely written...God Bless...and good luck...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review..
Blessings
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your soooo very welcome...Blessing to you...love xxoo
Comment from suep
I really love your poem and your presentation is beautiful with an excellent choice of artwork and the black/gold colors.
The only thing I want to point out to you (which can be very easy to miss) is that the contest is calling for a specific form for line 3...
Line 3: 6 syllables- 3 gerunds (ing verbs)
(I only recently learned what a gerund was! LOL)
I would hate to see this very fine and inspirational poem disqualified for not meeting that! You need three verbs ending in 'ing', such as living, loving, saving. (Feel free to use that if you like it) or choose any three 'ing' verbs that fit for you.
I'll look forward to reading the revised version, too, and wish you the best in the contest! Blessings, Sue P. :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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I really love your poem and your presentation is beautiful with an excellent choice of artwork and the black/gold colors.
The only thing I want to point out to you (which can be very easy to miss) is that the contest is calling for a specific form for line 3...
Line 3: 6 syllables- 3 gerunds (ing verbs)
(I only recently learned what a gerund was! LOL)
I would hate to see this very fine and inspirational poem disqualified for not meeting that! You need three verbs ending in 'ing', such as living, loving, saving. (Feel free to use that if you like it) or choose any three 'ing' verbs that fit for you.
I'll look forward to reading the revised version, too, and wish you the best in the contest! Blessings, Sue P. :)
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Sue,
Thanks so much for your honest review, I received a notice from the committee and have just completed by corrections (I hope it is correct now) my eight syllable line was incorrect as well. I was to use 4 words (8 syllables) to describe the subject.
Thanks so much for your kindness.
Hugs...
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I just reread and it is AWEsome! Excellent choice of words and it makes it even stronger than before. Beautifully done. Sounds like a winner to me! :)
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Sue,
Thanks so much for your kindness.
Comment from Susanjohn
Beautiful! You summed it all up in so few words. Your presentation is striking along with the picture. Very nicely done. Good luck to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Beautiful! You summed it all up in so few words. Your presentation is striking along with the picture. Very nicely done. Good luck to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very nice poem reminding us of what He did for us to forgive our sins and show us how we can have faith in His father. He died for us so one day we could enter Heaven and be with God. The only way to the Father is through Jesus!
nice poem!
Patty
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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A very nice poem reminding us of what He did for us to forgive our sins and show us how we can have faith in His father. He died for us so one day we could enter Heaven and be with God. The only way to the Father is through Jesus!
nice poem!
Patty
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, and very kind comments. Have a wonderful day...
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain about the Savior Jesus Christ who sacrificed his life like a lamb to save us from our sin. The ultimate prize to show His unconditional love for our sins.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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A very well-written Cinquain about the Savior Jesus Christ who sacrificed his life like a lamb to save us from our sin. The ultimate prize to show His unconditional love for our sins.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, have a wonderful day...
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Just a few words and you narrated Christ's whole life. It was touching and so true indeed. It is so sad that in our way we betray Him so much in our lives...
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Just a few words and you narrated Christ's whole life. It was touching and so true indeed. It is so sad that in our way we betray Him so much in our lives...
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, six star rating and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
These are well-chosen words for this lovely Cinquain poem. Jesus suffered in agony so that we could come to live with his Father. The least we can be is thankful and try our hardest to live as He would want us to. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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These are well-chosen words for this lovely Cinquain poem. Jesus suffered in agony so that we could come to live with his Father. The least we can be is thankful and try our hardest to live as He would want us to. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review, very kind comments and best wishes...
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This certainly deserves a six, bit unfortunately, I have used them all. In a very few words, you have completely described our Lord. I am a sucker for spiritual poems and this is among the best.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This certainly deserves a six, bit unfortunately, I have used them all. In a very few words, you have completely described our Lord. I am a sucker for spiritual poems and this is among the best.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review...
