Jesus
Lord and Savior38 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
This kind of poem to me seems to be a real challenge finding all the parts of speech that work and then getting them in the right place. I love the biblical references. They give your poem more depth. Font, picture and colors are all lovely.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This kind of poem to me seems to be a real challenge finding all the parts of speech that work and then getting them in the right place. I love the biblical references. They give your poem more depth. Font, picture and colors are all lovely.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Susan,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. The color scheme works beautifully along with the image. Your words are descriptive and flow smoothly with a great message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. The color scheme works beautifully along with the image. Your words are descriptive and flow smoothly with a great message. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and best wishes.
Blessings
Comment from Enzo Lance
This poem is a perfect example of Cinquain meeting all the requirements of contest prompt. How lovely to read and review few words but with a meaningful message.The ending is just a perfect word synonymous to Jesus. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This poem is a perfect example of Cinquain meeting all the requirements of contest prompt. How lovely to read and review few words but with a meaningful message.The ending is just a perfect word synonymous to Jesus. Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from smileycloud
a lovely presentation
the supporting pictured image is very well chosen for your beautiful perfectly formed Cinquain
your few words pack a powerful message into the readers mond and heart
very well done good luck int he contest have a smiley day
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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a lovely presentation
the supporting pictured image is very well chosen for your beautiful perfectly formed Cinquain
your few words pack a powerful message into the readers mond and heart
very well done good luck int he contest have a smiley day
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and best wishes
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
This is a good example of a cinquain. It meets all the prompts. I have no improvements that need to be made here. Keep up the good work. I'll be on the look out to read more.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This is a good example of a cinquain. It meets all the prompts. I have no improvements that need to be made here. Keep up the good work. I'll be on the look out to read more.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from zanya
There's a distinctive, prayerful, mediative quality to this poem - clear expression of Belief and Faith in Jesus and 'Savior'- thanks for sharing these sentiments
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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There's a distinctive, prayerful, mediative quality to this poem - clear expression of Belief and Faith in Jesus and 'Savior'- thanks for sharing these sentiments
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review...
Blessings
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, you have written a very lovely cinquain, in perfect form and the wording and subject you have chosen are just perfect. The accompanying display is beautiful. An overall lovely piece of work - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hello anon, you have written a very lovely cinquain, in perfect form and the wording and subject you have chosen are just perfect. The accompanying display is beautiful. An overall lovely piece of work - good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. This is a fine example of the cinquain style, as required by the contest. It is also an excellent description of the Lord Jesus.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hello mystery writer. This is a fine example of the cinquain style, as required by the contest. It is also an excellent description of the Lord Jesus.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
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You're welcome
Comment from richie b
Your Cinquain is very well written. Giving homage
to our Lord and Savior is always uplifting. Reading
your poem, was uplifting to me.
Thank you for an inspiring poem that promotes
Truth, Peace and Love.
Best wishes in contest!
Richie b
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Your Cinquain is very well written. Giving homage
to our Lord and Savior is always uplifting. Reading
your poem, was uplifting to me.
Thank you for an inspiring poem that promotes
Truth, Peace and Love.
Best wishes in contest!
Richie b
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments...
Blessings
Comment from harmony13
The author's words engaging, clear, and creative. The words of this
poem glorify our Savior. I found the presentation of this poem to be uplifting. Thank you for the author's notes. Have a great week!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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The author's words engaging, clear, and creative. The words of this
poem glorify our Savior. I found the presentation of this poem to be uplifting. Thank you for the author's notes. Have a great week!
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a great week as well.
Blessings
