Jesus
Lord and Savior38 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Jesus, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives and presents the Son of God to the reader. Nice.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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This cinquain, Jesus, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives and presents the Son of God to the reader. Nice.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments...
Comment from Teri7
This is such a lovely and very true poem you have penned for the cinquain contest. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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This is such a lovely and very true poem you have penned for the cinquain contest. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review...
Blessings
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful Christian testimony in poetic form! :) Great employment of the Cinquain format here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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A wonderful Christian testimony in poetic form! :) Great employment of the Cinquain format here - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and best wishes...
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent cinquain poem. Love the descriptive words you used describe Jesus. Good use of alliteration and very nice presentation.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Excellent cinquain poem. Love the descriptive words you used describe Jesus. Good use of alliteration and very nice presentation.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Janet,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Blessings...
Comment from karenina
A reverent yet powerful Cinquain! Beautiful in presentation and content. Simple praise is so much more effective to me...one need not embellish the treasure given to believers and those who I pray will come to believe.
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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A reverent yet powerful Cinquain! Beautiful in presentation and content. Simple praise is so much more effective to me...one need not embellish the treasure given to believers and those who I pray will come to believe.
Karenina
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for you review and very kind comments.
Blessings
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If you don't win (whomever you are)--somethings wrong!--Karenina
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Karenina with the beautiful name...you are so sweet and kind. You put a smile on my face.
Hugs...
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Ahhhh. Thank you!--Karenina
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
very well said my friend, God is my savior and all the beautiful words you have written, if this is in a contest you surely would have my vote
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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very well said my friend, God is my savior and all the beautiful words you have written, if this is in a contest you surely would have my vote
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
Comment from Coco Jane
Some good stuff here.
In line 2, consider using words that are less similar. Righteous and blameless seem to me to say basically the same thing. Maybe righteous and humble, powerful, obedient, perfect?
Line 4 has some nice sounds in it.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Some good stuff here.
In line 2, consider using words that are less similar. Righteous and blameless seem to me to say basically the same thing. Maybe righteous and humble, powerful, obedient, perfect?
Line 4 has some nice sounds in it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your honest review , very kind comments and suggestions, they are greatly appreciated. I did use your suggestion and changed from blameless to "humble."
Blessings...
Comment from royowen
This is a beautifully written cinquain, and it's so well presented that I think it enhances these wonderful works that God has wrought through his Son, this is a great post, and this is a good post, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This is a beautifully written cinquain, and it's so well presented that I think it enhances these wonderful works that God has wrought through his Son, this is a great post, and this is a good post, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Roy,
Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...
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My pleasureb
Comment from heavenempress
Have no doubt that this the best piece. Excellent work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. Wish to know how you designed the piece. It's very attractive. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Have no doubt that this the best piece. Excellent work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. Wish to know how you designed the piece. It's very attractive. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day...
Blessings
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your cinquain is vividly descriptive, skillfully composed and deeply spiritual. These powerful words could be used, collectively, to describe no one but the Lord.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Your cinquain is vividly descriptive, skillfully composed and deeply spiritual. These powerful words could be used, collectively, to describe no one but the Lord.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Janice,
Thank you kindly for your review and very kind comments.
Have a wonderful and blessed day.
Blessings...
