Comment from rhonnie69

Exceptional

CIAO TEMPESTE: SEE? There you go again...teaching me something that I don't know...that's worth knowing about. Again...thank you, Tempeste. I"m just a mesmerized guy...since I met this enchanting girl and...Tempest, please listen to me, my dear lady. If I could...if I knew How...I would bring you a bouquet of the, "Parrot Flower...sealed with a kiss. Tempeste, again...teach me...I want to learn. God bless you. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69,

 Comment Written 13-May-2020

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I have written about these flowers too and you brought the love and tranquility into your few ambient and soothing words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-May-2020

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reply by the author on 14-May-2020

Thank you for the kind review ..this gem of a flower brought me luck .. I came second in the contest!

I had no idea you wrote a poem on these unique flowers ..

I went and check out your portfolio ..

I see you delight in writing poems both about flowers and birds

I read several lovely entries before falling to sleep in bed !

Ciao!

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 14-May-2020

Congratulations on second place, love Dolly x

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Love that fun little rhyme in the end - brings a gentle smile for the evening... This is a unique flower focus for the contest - great one!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 10-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Glad you enjoyed the read ... this gem was unknown to me .. it s so pretty both in colour and form ! Mother Nature is wondrous!

Thank you for taking the time to review my wee poem .

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Exceptional

Hello there, my friend. This is a lovely flower entry. Such a pretty flower. I love how you brought them to life kissingð??? candy dandy love is adorable. Nicely done. Good luck! - Kerry

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

Comment from SS. Anjum

Good

The flower is unique and beautiful.......but found the third verse unnecessary....could have been another line maybe....overall its a good poem....good luck!

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

I changed the first line. ..hopefully the last line works now for you. (first and last line were very similar before the edit).

Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

Wow, what a beautiful flower and praising ode to this wonder of nature. Before this poem I was not aware that such a flower existed. This 5-7-5 Haiku Poem is written with an image that is befitting of its flower form. Buona Fortuna in the contest. Giovanni

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Ciao Tommaso!

Sono contenta che ti sia piaciuto la mia poesia .. questo fiore e ? senza dubbio una gemma tra i fiori .

Spero che ha guardato il video ..offre qualche dettaglio in più ..

Ti ringrazio per le 5 stelle e per avermi augurata ... Buona Fortuna....

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 11-May-2020

y/w giovanni

si ho fatto il video è stato fantastico!

Comment from Amanda Louise Davis

Needs Improvement

This wasn't about a flower at all, but instead about birds. I liked it, but it doesn't fit with the title. The flower wasn't mentioned at all in the actual poem.

 Comment Written 09-May-2020

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reply by the author on 11-May-2020

Hopefully you like my poem better..I edited it

I was not aware that the flower s name had to be part of the poem ...I am not acquainted with all the rules yet.

Ciao!