Dancing Ballerinas
5-7-5 Fuchsias with their flouncing skirts.15 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Lovely 5/7/5! I adore fuchsias, but I have the darndest experiences with them. These "ballerinas" do not like much wind, and unfortunately, we are pretty breezy where we live. Beautiful imagery!
thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Lovely 5/7/5! I adore fuchsias, but I have the darndest experiences with them. These "ballerinas" do not like much wind, and unfortunately, we are pretty breezy where we live. Beautiful imagery!
thank you!
diane
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Fuchsias grow very happily where I live - I love them too. There are many different varieties; the bold colours are very appealing.
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Yes, I am partial to the pale pink ones. And I will purchase some this spring...if it ever stops snowing here! :)
Comment from tfawcus
That is a particularly splendid specimen of a fuschia in your picture, and one that you describe precisely with your metaphor. Very nicely done, The alliteration of the 'b's works well.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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That is a particularly splendid specimen of a fuschia in your picture, and one that you describe precisely with your metaphor. Very nicely done, The alliteration of the 'b's works well.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks Tony. I love fuchsias - they grow really well here.
Comment from humpwhistle
Very nicely done. I never looked at fuchsia that way before. Very creative imagery. They even seem to have pointed toes.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Very nicely done. I never looked at fuchsia that way before. Very creative imagery. They even seem to have pointed toes.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks for your supportive comments. Fuchsias grow really well where I live.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count
and vivid imagery.
-A good comparison of
the flower to the ballerina's twirl.
-Very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-A well written poem
with good syllable count
and vivid imagery.
-A good comparison of
the flower to the ballerina's twirl.
-Very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks very much for your nice review.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from pome lover
delightful analogy. They do look like tiny ballerinas in this picture.
Good visual in your word choices, painting a picture to match the one chosen.Your description is fanciful and lyrical.
Very nice.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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delightful analogy. They do look like tiny ballerinas in this picture.
Good visual in your word choices, painting a picture to match the one chosen.Your description is fanciful and lyrical.
Very nice.
Good luck in the contest.
pome lover
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you... I can go to bed with your nice words making me feel good.
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You're welcome, and I'm glad.
