Farewell 'Til Morning
5-7-5 Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is one of the best 5-7-5 poems I have read in a long time. Both the poem and the presentation are superb. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is one of the best 5-7-5 poems I have read in a long time. Both the poem and the presentation are superb. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Well, Debbie, whether you realize it or not you just made my weekend: thank you, thank you for those humbling words and those wonderful stars!! Here's sending you some 'starshine' for your weekend - enjoy some fresh air!! ;)
Comment from Gloria ....
Strong imagery here with soft undertones of sorrow, even though it's not goodbye just adieu.
You've done well with your presentation and wording and I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
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Strong imagery here with soft undertones of sorrow, even though it's not goodbye just adieu.
You've done well with your presentation and wording and I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you! Have a great day!
Comment from Seville Bates
Meets all the requirements in syllable count. Beautiful imagery and font color are a great compliment to the work. It drew me into the words and meaning of the poem. Nice job, overall!
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Meets all the requirements in syllable count. Beautiful imagery and font color are a great compliment to the work. It drew me into the words and meaning of the poem. Nice job, overall!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you! Have a wonderful evening!
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You are welcome
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is really lovely. Photo and text compliment perfectly and the colors feel of the night and nightingale. Just perfect. No changes needed.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your work. Well done!
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This is really lovely. Photo and text compliment perfectly and the colors feel of the night and nightingale. Just perfect. No changes needed.
Thank you for the opportunity to view your work. Well done!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you! Have a wonderful evening!
Comment from Margaret Bednar
This poem is beautifully presented - I love the word "melodious" and "nightingale" - both are very poetic words in and of themselves. My favorite time of day is a spring or summer evening when the birds are singing their last song and taking one last flight before night.
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This poem is beautifully presented - I love the word "melodious" and "nightingale" - both are very poetic words in and of themselves. My favorite time of day is a spring or summer evening when the birds are singing their last song and taking one last flight before night.
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Minglement
What a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I always love when these harken back to the haiku roots and pertain to nature. Well done. I wish you luck in the contest :)
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reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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What a lovely entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I always love when these harken back to the haiku roots and pertain to nature. Well done. I wish you luck in the contest :)
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Many thanks! Have a wonderful evening!
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My pleasure :) Take care :)
