Farewell 'Til Morning
5-7-5 Contest Offering16 total reviews
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
This poem and the artwork you chose are so lovely and soothing. You have met the contest requirements but gone above that by writing a piece that is a delight to read. I could hear the nightingale in your words.
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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This poem and the artwork you chose are so lovely and soothing. You have met the contest requirements but gone above that by writing a piece that is a delight to read. I could hear the nightingale in your words.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 13-May-2020
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Thank you, A-Louise, for dropping by on this one, my lady -- you have a great remainder of the week out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Farewell til Morning, has the right set up and allows that the quiet darkness has a chipper chipper reminding all that there will be another day. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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This 5-7-5, Farewell til Morning, has the right set up and allows that the quiet darkness has a chipper chipper reminding all that there will be another day. Nice.
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you, Bill, for your awesome review! ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Bucketlist: to hear the song of a nightingale in person!
Such a well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Bucketlist: to hear the song of a nightingale in person!
Such a well-crafted 5/7/5 poetic offering!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Beautiful Lady - they are unique evening songbirds... take care up there!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Lovely presentation. The lines connect grammatically and helps to flow. Well done. It looks like it's going to win the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Lovely presentation. The lines connect grammatically and helps to flow. Well done. It looks like it's going to win the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your encouraging comments!!
Comment from June Sargent
This is a very soothing and peaceful piece that captures the sights and sounds of twilight - the remains of the day. The nightingale's song is the perfect way to end the day and welcome the night. Her adieu. Lovely.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This is a very soothing and peaceful piece that captures the sights and sounds of twilight - the remains of the day. The nightingale's song is the perfect way to end the day and welcome the night. Her adieu. Lovely.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much, June, for these wonderful comments!
Comment from Enzo Lance
The title of your Haiku is very eye catching that it summarizes the whole Haiku Poem. Nightingale has a very powerful and beautiful song that can actually last till morning. This is traditional haiku poem with its traditional form an style of nature , animals an season. Syllables are well don in 575 format. Good Job.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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The title of your Haiku is very eye catching that it summarizes the whole Haiku Poem. Nightingale has a very powerful and beautiful song that can actually last till morning. This is traditional haiku poem with its traditional form an style of nature , animals an season. Syllables are well don in 575 format. Good Job.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderfully encouragin review - have an awesome weekend!
Comment from karenina
Is it just that I'm prone to tender emotions more now that just being outside the house is tantamount to escaping from prison? I don't know...
I only know that your little poem and the overall hue the same as my mood these days came together and made me want to weep...AND rejoice for that sweet wing'ed freedom we don't have right now Beautifully done.--Karenina
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Is it just that I'm prone to tender emotions more now that just being outside the house is tantamount to escaping from prison? I don't know...
I only know that your little poem and the overall hue the same as my mood these days came together and made me want to weep...AND rejoice for that sweet wing'ed freedom we don't have right now Beautifully done.--Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I think it may be a little bit of both for all of us, Karenina... Thank you for the wonderful comments today - get some fresh air and find your smile again!
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Six out of seven days I keep a stiff upper lip and do well...it's a cold grey day here today and my husband is at odds as well so the good thing is I know this will pass. Your poem just hit a nerve and in its own sweet way made me melancholy AND with a smile!--Karenina
Comment from zanya
This 5-7-5 is truly a little poetic gem -so much poetic sentiment expressed within the confines of the format -I don't have a 6 - but will follow through in the booth !! thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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This 5-7-5 is truly a little poetic gem -so much poetic sentiment expressed within the confines of the format -I don't have a 6 - but will follow through in the booth !! thanks for sharing
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much! Have a great day!
Comment from Rmocruz
I usually find the 5-7-5 format to be trite at times.
This one is a beautifully penned Haiku.
The visual-art is quite appropriate to enhance your nature theme.
I see a promising contest entry.
Best Wishes!
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I usually find the 5-7-5 format to be trite at times.
This one is a beautifully penned Haiku.
The visual-art is quite appropriate to enhance your nature theme.
I see a promising contest entry.
Best Wishes!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you. Have a great day!
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You're welcome, you as well!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the nightingale song here as he sings for us in the evening as we are about to sleep, an ambient write, filled with natures sweet serenade, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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You brought the nightingale song here as he sings for us in the evening as we are about to sleep, an ambient write, filled with natures sweet serenade, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you! Have a great day!
