A Game of Kings
Share A Story In A Poem Contest Entry45 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
You've chosen a meter and rhyme scheme that suit this kind of storytelling well. The narrative proceeds at a stately pace and there is a sense of inevitability. I appreciated your notes on the rules and the play of Sorry, a game I've not encountered before.
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You've chosen a meter and rhyme scheme that suit this kind of storytelling well. The narrative proceeds at a stately pace and there is a sense of inevitability. I appreciated your notes on the rules and the play of Sorry, a game I've not encountered before.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Tony. I'm sure there's various renditions of the game but Sorry is the one my family played while I growing up. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again, friend.
Ron
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
This is a clever poem, that works well and has some great descriptions in it to communicate your ideas well to the reader. I think the rhyme and structure work well.
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This is a clever poem, that works well and has some great descriptions in it to communicate your ideas well to the reader. I think the rhyme and structure work well.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Who. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Innovative and creative, but appreciable and enjoyable is the game of the shows perceptibility in activation; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
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Innovative and creative, but appreciable and enjoyable is the game of the shows perceptibility in activation; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Al. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from djsaxon
Great journey, and impeccable rhyme throughout. The iamb totally befits the write. The author's notes also. A tour de force. Well done. Cheers - DJ
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Great journey, and impeccable rhyme throughout. The iamb totally befits the write. The author's notes also. A tour de force. Well done. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, DJ. I really appreciate you taking time to read and comment on this lengthy piece. I'm glad you liked my silly tale. Have a great day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/story about a game of war between two kings without spilling blood of their followers in real life and the winner takes it all. A mind game with a bit of luck for the winner.
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A very well-written poem/story about a game of war between two kings without spilling blood of their followers in real life and the winner takes it all. A mind game with a bit of luck for the winner.
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Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and the gracious stars, Sandra. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
