A Game of Kings
Share A Story In A Poem Contest Entry45 total reviews
Comment from richie b
Ds,
Smooth as silk rhyming a river of easy flowing lace.
A very creative muse. A great story, strong imagery,
fun read. Very entertaining, good luck in the contest.
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Ds,
Smooth as silk rhyming a river of easy flowing lace.
A very creative muse. A great story, strong imagery,
fun read. Very entertaining, good luck in the contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review, Richie. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you lik3ed the piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Bill Pinder
Very creative and humorous poem that includes the old game sorry as a way to decide which king took over the kingdoms. It is a very clever idea then you wrote it very well. Bill
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Very creative and humorous poem that includes the old game sorry as a way to decide which king took over the kingdoms. It is a very clever idea then you wrote it very well. Bill
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Bill. I really appreciate you stopping by, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Raul. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Boogienights
I remember playing that game as a child. Thank goodness a kingdom wasn't at stake! I loved this story poem, so well told, it kept my interest the entire time. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I remember playing that game as a child. Thank goodness a kingdom wasn't at stake! I loved this story poem, so well told, it kept my interest the entire time. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Boogie. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Game of Kings
by DragonSkulls
Hello my friend
That is quite a game and ending. Great entry for the Share A Story In A Poem contest your story and characters are well developed. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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A Game of Kings
by DragonSkulls
Hello my friend
That is quite a game and ending. Great entry for the Share A Story In A Poem contest your story and characters are well developed. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and huge sixer, Gypsy. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and gracious rating. I'm glad you liked my lengthy tale.
Ron
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, love your satirical approach to the crown of glory and those who play the game of Sorry.
A brilliant story in a poem written with superb metre just perfect for telling this type of epic war.
Excellent idea, so unique and you played it extremely well. What a fun read today.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Ha, love your satirical approach to the crown of glory and those who play the game of Sorry.
A brilliant story in a poem written with superb metre just perfect for telling this type of epic war.
Excellent idea, so unique and you played it extremely well. What a fun read today.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Hey, Gloria, hello. Thank you so much for the great review and stars. Yeah, I wanted to come up with something ridiculous for them to play for their kingdoms. That, and wanting to lead up to the goofy last line. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece, Gloria. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your topic is unique and well-expressed. I like the progression from the first realization of trouble brewing to the last words of the conclusion. Your rhymes and flow add much to this poem. There is good imagery. I could visualize this as I read it. Thanks for the informative notes, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your topic is unique and well-expressed. I like the progression from the first realization of trouble brewing to the last words of the conclusion. Your rhymes and flow add much to this poem. There is good imagery. I could visualize this as I read it. Thanks for the informative notes, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and stars, Jan. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this lengthy piece and for the kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silly story. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An epic write and I thought at first it was a chess game and I am rather fond of playing chess, but this is an entirely different game and I enjoyed the fight to the end, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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An epic write and I thought at first it was a chess game and I am rather fond of playing chess, but this is an entirely different game and I enjoyed the fight to the end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly. Yeah, I used chess as a game between kings before. This one was the silliest idea I could come up with for a game between them. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from Mark D. R.
Thanks for those memories of family SORRY games.
Truthfully, I rarely review any long verse or fiction post. However, your artwork intrigued me very much. So I read your entry from top to its final end. You created an interesting battle scenario, which our world leaders might consider rather than all the saber rattling and rhetoric thrown in our faces.
It is a good game.
Mark
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks for those memories of family SORRY games.
Truthfully, I rarely review any long verse or fiction post. However, your artwork intrigued me very much. So I read your entry from top to its final end. You created an interesting battle scenario, which our world leaders might consider rather than all the saber rattling and rhetoric thrown in our faces.
It is a good game.
Mark
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Lol. Yeah, we can do without all of that. Thank you for the great review and stars, Mark.
Comment from amada
Well, this was a gret exercise in mental observation and ability. But it was exciting. I admire your mental ability to think,and write about it. As well as the ability to create. For sure, a very different edition to the usual stuff.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Well, this was a gret exercise in mental observation and ability. But it was exciting. I admire your mental ability to think,and write about it. As well as the ability to create. For sure, a very different edition to the usual stuff.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Amada. I really appreciate how you like my mental ability to write what I'm thinking. I always try to go outside the box. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great weekend.
Ron
