A Game of Kings
Share A Story In A Poem Contest Entry45 total reviews
Comment from Zachary A-OK
This was a fantastic read. The juxtaposition of a board game being played through literal warfare was most engaging. The rhyme-scheme held up throughout the narrative, making for a fluid read. Well done, and I hope to see more of your work moving forward!
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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This was a fantastic read. The juxtaposition of a board game being played through literal warfare was most engaging. The rhyme-scheme held up throughout the narrative, making for a fluid read. Well done, and I hope to see more of your work moving forward!
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Zachary. I really appreciate the generous stars and comments, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Wow, thank you for the giant 7. Awesome. I'm glad you liked my offering.
Comment from heavenempress
Excellent piece of work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. So this work can be represented by a game of chess. I liked that. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Excellent piece of work and I liked the presentation and style of the poem. So this work can be represented by a game of chess. I liked that. Keep it up by writing more. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Heaven E. The game was actually the board game Sorry rather than chess. I thought about chess but really just wanted to lead up to the last line. Lol. I really appreciate the generous rating, HE. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A sorry game of chess where the winner takes it all. Thank you for sharing this game today I learned something new today. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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A sorry game of chess where the winner takes it all. Thank you for sharing this game today I learned something new today. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Iza. They actually played the game called Sorry rather than a chess game. I wanted them to risk their kingdoms on a ridiculous game and I used Sorry as the game just so I could use the last line. Lol. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem, it was enthralling from beginning to the end, the classical style, long but yet enthralling narrative sucks one in, and at the same tome, you've made is sound as though there is a deadly field battle going on. Well done, this was most interesting, incredibly well written and rhymed, smooth, good reading, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This is an excellent poem, it was enthralling from beginning to the end, the classical style, long but yet enthralling narrative sucks one in, and at the same tome, you've made is sound as though there is a deadly field battle going on. Well done, this was most interesting, incredibly well written and rhymed, smooth, good reading, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Ron
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You too Ron
Comment from Ulla
Hi DS it's quite the story you've written in your wonderful poem. It kept me on my toes all the way through. I liked it a lot and it's a great entry for the contest. Great imagery and great story. Now to the game! Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Hi DS it's quite the story you've written in your wonderful poem. It kept me on my toes all the way through. I liked it a lot and it's a great entry for the contest. Great imagery and great story. Now to the game! Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review, Ulla. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked the piece. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Ron
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Comment from Alchera
This pandemic lock down has given us the opportunity to discover many home activities that had been preserved for other ocassions. This Games of Kings is a Great poem. Well built up throughout its rhythmical and rhymed stanzaical structural content. I think that its a whimsical poetical text, too.
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This pandemic lock down has given us the opportunity to discover many home activities that had been preserved for other ocassions. This Games of Kings is a Great poem. Well built up throughout its rhythmical and rhymed stanzaical structural content. I think that its a whimsical poetical text, too.
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Alchera. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Always welcome! Take care and blessings from Italy.Tony
Comment from oliver818
This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well, and has a good feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the way you used cards in the structure. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well, and has a good feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the way you used cards in the structure. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 11-May-2020
reply by the author on 11-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Oliver. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from smileycloud
wow
a game depicting true life for sure
the strategies and the strong forcefullness of battle and devious moves but vying for victory
very well written
such an interesting and completely engrossing game/poem
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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wow
a game depicting true life for sure
the strategies and the strong forcefullness of battle and devious moves but vying for victory
very well written
such an interesting and completely engrossing game/poem
have a smiley day
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Smiley. I'm glad you liked my tale for power played through a Sorry game. Lol.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Dragon Skulls: great imagination and rhymes in your story poem.
You had intensity and hope for the king's narrator. I know that games
are popular with kings and all in this lockdown. Thanks for your
amazing poem and challenge. Stars **************** flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Dragon Skulls: great imagination and rhymes in your story poem.
You had intensity and hope for the king's narrator. I know that games
are popular with kings and all in this lockdown. Thanks for your
amazing poem and challenge. Stars **************** flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 10-May-2020
reply by the author on 10-May-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review and big sixer, Fly. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and rating. I'm glad you liked my silly piece. Thank you again.
Ron
