O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "God's O' Divine Eyes"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Dilettante junior
It is a beautiful piece. Very creative. You have a great imagination and an awesome way with words. Repetition puts emphasis, sets a train of thought. Bravo!
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It is a beautiful piece. Very creative. You have a great imagination and an awesome way with words. Repetition puts emphasis, sets a train of thought. Bravo!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Gert sherwood
God's O' Divine Eyes
Alcreator Litt Dear
I must say you have an original way of writing about God's divine eyes.
The eye through which I see God is the same eye through which God sees me; my eye and God's eye are one eye, one seeing, one knowing, one love.
Gert
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God's O' Divine Eyes
Alcreator Litt Dear
I must say you have an original way of writing about God's divine eyes.
The eye through which I see God is the same eye through which God sees me; my eye and God's eye are one eye, one seeing, one knowing, one love.
Gert
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
I feel it is very brave of you to branch out and develop your own take on a given well known style. I can see how much time and work went into crafting this poem.
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I feel it is very brave of you to branch out and develop your own take on a given well known style. I can see how much time and work went into crafting this poem.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your acrostic. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Your picture is a good pairing with your well thought out words. Those words flow smoothly, the color scheme works well, the formatting of the lines makes it easy to read, and the message is clear. Good use of alliteration of o, i, & s. Yes, God is in control of all things.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a good job with your acrostic. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Your picture is a good pairing with your well thought out words. Those words flow smoothly, the color scheme works well, the formatting of the lines makes it easy to read, and the message is clear. Good use of alliteration of o, i, & s. Yes, God is in control of all things.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
You have conveyed a very interesting message here. God is omnipresent. But does He really punish his own children. Sinners will suffer from that guilty conscience throughout their lives. That should be a lesson for them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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You have conveyed a very interesting message here. God is omnipresent. But does He really punish his own children. Sinners will suffer from that guilty conscience throughout their lives. That should be a lesson for them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from rindy ryan
I think you have done a good job of relaying a message using a poetic and creative form. I appreciate all the notes to explain your work and thinking. It seems like a lot of words to say something simple. I understand the point of repetition but it sounds redundant to me. The artwork and the tone of your poem match. Good job!
reply by rindy ryan on 16-Apr-2021
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I think you have done a good job of relaying a message using a poetic and creative form. I appreciate all the notes to explain your work and thinking. It seems like a lot of words to say something simple. I understand the point of repetition but it sounds redundant to me. The artwork and the tone of your poem match. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
reply by rindy ryan on 16-Apr-2021
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By the way, I appreciate what a
Good Christian you are by not being vengeful or prideful. It?s refreshing to know there are true Christians in the community who seek to lift each other up as Jesus did. Thank you for being so helpful to seek my writing and provide such kind and thoughtful comments. You are truly one of His chosen ones. God bless.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, it is certainly very original, and very imaginative, expressed in your own uniquely creative style. It is also thoughtful and provokes the reader to think and analyse as well. Thanks for posting.
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Yes, it is certainly very original, and very imaginative, expressed in your own uniquely creative style. It is also thoughtful and provokes the reader to think and analyse as well. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from thoughtgame2
i see you are very good at what you do.im also sure you have a great time doing it also. unfortunetly there are so many like myself who just wants to write not fight about how... keep up the greaat work.thanx for sharing.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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i see you are very good at what you do.im also sure you have a great time doing it also. unfortunetly there are so many like myself who just wants to write not fight about how... keep up the greaat work.thanx for sharing.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for writing three sentences, and I find three sentences are wrong and incorrectly expressed, and what you have written is confusing and contradictory, just you may look into seven typos in three incomplete sentences you have written and I just mention the truth and it is not commenting on your words; moreover, all the sentences are inexpressive; I do appreciate you might have written everything in a hurry:
i (I) see you are very good at what you do. im (I'm) also sure you have a great time doing it also. unfortunetly (Unfortunately) there are so many like myself who just wants to write not fight about how... keep up the greaat (great) work.(space) thanx (Thanks) for sharing.
Moreover, this inexpressive joining of words are grammatically wrong, at the same time:
there are so many like myself who just wants to write not fight about how
If I check it thoroughly, I am sure, I will find more and more misuse of English Language.
But I shall not ask for your clarifications and I will appreciate you endeavoured to write a review, though you written something else, nothing about the work.
Thank you very much for your prompt and innocent endeavour.
I have no complaint about your writing, or writing review of my work and I never mind at your rating.
I do appreciate your endeavour.
With the kindest personal regards,
Please do keep writing.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
24/03/2021
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Wow. Acrostic, artwork & author notes are A+. I love Biblical Poetry. This year I am reading through the Bible in Chronological order. What a challenge. Commentary notes from F. LaGard Smith Guideposts -- he has many published works for a time such as this.
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Wow. Acrostic, artwork & author notes are A+. I love Biblical Poetry. This year I am reading through the Bible in Chronological order. What a challenge. Commentary notes from F. LaGard Smith Guideposts -- he has many published works for a time such as this.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2021
Comment from Aiona
This is a nicely done acrostic. There's some end rhymes, and I especially like all the alliteration. The topic is also important, and the last line is a challenge to action to the reader.
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This is a nicely done acrostic. There's some end rhymes, and I especially like all the alliteration. The topic is also important, and the last line is a challenge to action to the reader.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
