O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "God's O' Divine Eyes"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
102 total reviews
Comment from jwsteele
The eyes are the window to the soul.
I've read.
Some eyes are shining
Some eyes are dead
You see the meaning
In all that is real
This does not hurt anyone belongs to any religion, faith, belief known or unknown, recognised or unrecognised, you know or you have read
Your eyes reveal
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The eyes are the window to the soul.
I've read.
Some eyes are shining
Some eyes are dead
You see the meaning
In all that is real
This does not hurt anyone belongs to any religion, faith, belief known or unknown, recognised or unrecognised, you know or you have read
Your eyes reveal
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
Comment from Begin Again
Only our Lord through his divine eyes can see what truly lives within someone's soul and only he can decide how one shall be punished or blessed for the deeds we do. Very well written. Smiles, Carol
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Only our Lord through his divine eyes can see what truly lives within someone's soul and only he can decide how one shall be punished or blessed for the deeds we do. Very well written. Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
Comment from Bonnie Seach
The author's notes are explanatory and helpful. A fine example of how to put the allocated space to good use. Thank you
The self designed format for the poem in acrostic style is well received. Poetic licence is pefmittedð???ð???. Thank you for sharing. Your post is interesting and educational. Best wishes
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The author's notes are explanatory and helpful. A fine example of how to put the allocated space to good use. Thank you
The self designed format for the poem in acrostic style is well received. Poetic licence is pefmittedð???ð???. Thank you for sharing. Your post is interesting and educational. Best wishes
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
Comment from equestrik
Interesting write an i like your creativity in combining free verse with an acrostic. You have done a creative job of expressing yourself and your beliefs. Well done.
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Interesting write an i like your creativity in combining free verse with an acrostic. You have done a creative job of expressing yourself and your beliefs. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was the most beautiful Acrostic to God, with a stunning artwork. You put volumes in this poem. Absolutely delightful, and thank you for your author notes.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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That was the most beautiful Acrostic to God, with a stunning artwork. You put volumes in this poem. Absolutely delightful, and thank you for your author notes.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Alcreator:
This is the third very powerful poem written by you that I have reviewed tonight. I think you should not worry so much about whether people are going to be offended by anything you write. You never write anything that could in any way be construed as anything but a message from your heart. I always like reading your works.
Rdfrdmom2
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Alcreator:
This is the third very powerful poem written by you that I have reviewed tonight. I think you should not worry so much about whether people are going to be offended by anything you write. You never write anything that could in any way be construed as anything but a message from your heart. I always like reading your works.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from R.E.R.
Great writing here! I've always struggled with writing acrostic poetry, but you have done a wonderful job with this one. Well done, and have a great day.
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Great writing here! I've always struggled with writing acrostic poetry, but you have done a wonderful job with this one. Well done, and have a great day.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Sanku
God may punish to save resources. This pandemic may be that .he wants to reduce the number of humans who are systematically destroying this planet
supremely surveillant eyes....this was good
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God may punish to save resources. This pandemic may be that .he wants to reduce the number of humans who are systematically destroying this planet
supremely surveillant eyes....this was good
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done mediation on the meaning of God and his or her presence in this world. I like the acrostic poetry from employed here. the best stanza is the following
Eyes; yes, His Divine Eyes
Yes, truly, we know, God's O' Divine Eyes
Earthily He punishes all the destructive sinners' lies
So test by telling lies, committing crimes, misinterpreting anything or anyone
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nicely done mediation on the meaning of God and his or her presence in this world. I like the acrostic poetry from employed here. the best stanza is the following
Eyes; yes, His Divine Eyes
Yes, truly, we know, God's O' Divine Eyes
Earthily He punishes all the destructive sinners' lies
So test by telling lies, committing crimes, misinterpreting anything or anyone
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
It is a spiritual poem. I like the emphasis of EYES. We may live in the dark and need God's eyes to guide us in the right direction.
We need to do everything with a good conscience otherwise we will be punished... (by Karma).
God will forgive us...
thanks for sharing.
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It is a spiritual poem. I like the emphasis of EYES. We may live in the dark and need God's eyes to guide us in the right direction.
We need to do everything with a good conscience otherwise we will be punished... (by Karma).
God will forgive us...
thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
