Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Royal Chambers And Wine"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
2 total reviews
Comment from ttec4u
Very well written, clever story. I loved how it was written to sound like the time of which is referred to. I loved how the fine details described the surroundings so well I had no problem seeing just where he was and what he saw.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Very well written, clever story. I loved how it was written to sound like the time of which is referred to. I loved how the fine details described the surroundings so well I had no problem seeing just where he was and what he saw.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(Typos: her's s/b hers; shear s/b sheer; laid s/b lay, aint' s/b ain't) This is delightful! Witty, whimsical, and in rhyme--not even a requirement. Clever line: delight between his weak knees grew. Perfect title and punchline too. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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(Typos: her's s/b hers; shear s/b sheer; laid s/b lay, aint' s/b ain't) This is delightful! Witty, whimsical, and in rhyme--not even a requirement. Clever line: delight between his weak knees grew. Perfect title and punchline too. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your encouragement and kind review!