The Muse Wears Many Disguises
Even when we least expect them to...9 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
Wow! Fantastic promise kept from its very beginning title and suprising conclusion. Jackson's remedy for Don's writing block, which often does happen, had perfectly been solved with a well acted provocative anonimous bisexed window cleaner's show which had given him a real thirty-seven orgiastic written paged reverie. I really loved it!
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Wow! Fantastic promise kept from its very beginning title and suprising conclusion. Jackson's remedy for Don's writing block, which often does happen, had perfectly been solved with a well acted provocative anonimous bisexed window cleaner's show which had given him a real thirty-seven orgiastic written paged reverie. I really loved it!
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanx so much for those shining stars and your awesome review on this one, Tony... so appreciate your constant support!! ;) Hope things are looking 'up' over there, my friend! Take care of you and yours and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
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Ciao Yvette! I am really Happy for your continuous writing success of which I am proud of having such a sincere cultural friend as we had told each other since the beginning. I will always search the right text to review because some arte really nonsense so I switch them off my portfolio. Here the situation is getting a bit better but I personally don't go out yet and look after my grandchildren and help them with their home/class/ work. Blessings. Tony
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Don sure got an eye full, didn't he? He got what is called a site to behold. It sounded like perhaps a woman was washing the windows but it turns out it was a man. So now who was this person really?
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Don sure got an eye full, didn't he? He got what is called a site to behold. It sounded like perhaps a woman was washing the windows but it turns out it was a man. So now who was this person really?
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review!! 8-)
Comment from Thesis
LOL,
This was well done. I liked how you allowed the writer's imaginative muse to shift into gear to transform the situation to a sensual one and to swap gender to be able to imagine a new partner for the Spymaster.
The humorous ending was also a surprise and added a chuckle.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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LOL,
This was well done. I liked how you allowed the writer's imaginative muse to shift into gear to transform the situation to a sensual one and to swap gender to be able to imagine a new partner for the Spymaster.
The humorous ending was also a surprise and added a chuckle.
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your time and your review, Thesis - so good to hear from you today! Be sure to stop by again sometime - take care! ;)
Comment from papa55mike
Inspiration comes in many forms (pun intended). What a wonderfully written little story that will inspire many.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Inspiration comes in many forms (pun intended). What a wonderfully written little story that will inspire many.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you for your time and your review, Papa - always so good to hear from you over here!
Comment from thoughtgame2
Very good I did not see the reason you wrote that way,until I was suppose to...very well played indeed..Thank you...also I thought I saw a reading error in this piece. On the first line starting with she reappeared with a buckets...I could be mistaken but it dose not sound right...other than that great job.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Very good I did not see the reason you wrote that way,until I was suppose to...very well played indeed..Thank you...also I thought I saw a reading error in this piece. On the first line starting with she reappeared with a buckets...I could be mistaken but it dose not sound right...other than that great job.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and your review - that catch is quite appreciated! Have a wonderful evening!
Comment from country ranch writer
This is cute as his mind played tricks and the muse used him to get his story written by making him think he was watching a se xy window washer who was in all reality a guy washing the Windows.hehe.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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This is cute as his mind played tricks and the muse used him to get his story written by making him think he was watching a se xy window washer who was in all reality a guy washing the Windows.hehe.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to really read and for understanding the implications of the story - you are but the second that actually 'got it'! Thank you again and have a wonderful week!
Comment from SS. Anjum
Haha a good one.....everything is well described in this poem......observations, storyline, details, research all well noted and presented.......light hearted humor enjoyable to read!
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Haha a good one.....everything is well described in this poem......observations, storyline, details, research all well noted and presented.......light hearted humor enjoyable to read!
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Funny? Poem? Research noted and presented? I think you used the wrong cut/paste review when you submitted this. I will be sure to make a note of your name for future reference. Thank you.
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Oh sorry mistaken for a poem...
Actually the lines you used sound a bit rhyming so got confused. And the rest i reviewed is how i have understood it
Comment from January L'Angelle
That was some disguise! I liked the story as provocative as it was, it made me blush. The writing style was very good and I think it will do well in the contest. Good job. -January L.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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That was some disguise! I liked the story as provocative as it was, it made me blush. The writing style was very good and I think it will do well in the contest. Good job. -January L.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thanks much, January, and hope the blush improved your glowing smile for the day!
Comment from MickeyV
I really enjoyed this read. It was very creative and held my attention. Loved the ability to use that squeegee as a sexy prop. The writing was clean and intriguing. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I really enjoyed this read. It was very creative and held my attention. Loved the ability to use that squeegee as a sexy prop. The writing was clean and intriguing. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thanks much, Mickey, for your time and your review!
