Grandma's Visit
Disguised Story Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
What great fun! You really got me. Good job! Very well written and laying the ground work for a surprise ending. Good luck in the contest, you deserve to do well.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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What great fun! You really got me. Good job! Very well written and laying the ground work for a surprise ending. Good luck in the contest, you deserve to do well.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jerome. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from LisaMay
That Wilbur with his "unresolved issues" sure is a sadistic prick. I thought Grandma must have died from Alzheimer's complications while i was reading it, but then a certain trademark piss-take soon settled who was pulling the strings here.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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That Wilbur with his "unresolved issues" sure is a sadistic prick. I thought Grandma must have died from Alzheimer's complications while i was reading it, but then a certain trademark piss-take soon settled who was pulling the strings here.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Yeah, he's got some problems. Lol. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Lisa. I was just in one of those moods again. Had to come up with something no one else would. Lol. I hope everything is going good on your end.
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Comment from LyndaS
I had no idea where you were going with this at all. As I read this sweet Grandma story I started to wonder if maybe after you die you just get stupid. Granny wasn't answering anything correctly and couldn't even remember the words to their favorite song. Then Wilbur appears. HaHa! I finished reading this and then read it over again. Yep. Many serious red flags throughout.
This is soooo well written, author. The flow is very smooth and your story is great. And a very funny ending. Your picture is also perfect. Excellent work. Well done! Thanks for the laugh. Lynda
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I had no idea where you were going with this at all. As I read this sweet Grandma story I started to wonder if maybe after you die you just get stupid. Granny wasn't answering anything correctly and couldn't even remember the words to their favorite song. Then Wilbur appears. HaHa! I finished reading this and then read it over again. Yep. Many serious red flags throughout.
This is soooo well written, author. The flow is very smooth and your story is great. And a very funny ending. Your picture is also perfect. Excellent work. Well done! Thanks for the laugh. Lynda
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you for the outstanding review and giant six, Lynda. I actually did the picture myself from a couple different Google Images. Couldn't find a picture of an old lady ghost in a rocking chair. Go figure. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Thank you again.
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My pleasure 😇
Comment from humpwhistle
Well, I'd say Wilbur has more than some issues to work out. He's despicable. Interesting idea for a 'disguised' story, though.
I've heard of identity theft after death, but nothing like this.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Well, I'd say Wilbur has more than some issues to work out. He's despicable. Interesting idea for a 'disguised' story, though.
I've heard of identity theft after death, but nothing like this.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Yeah, he has some problems. Lol. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Lee. I really appreciate the stop by, friend. Have a good one.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Wilbur is a disguised character, she is not your grandmother; a realistic addition, good climax and nice resolution; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Wilbur is a disguised character, she is not your grandmother; a realistic addition, good climax and nice resolution; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Al. I really appreciate it.
