Ol' Glory!
U.S. Joint Services Commandos annihilate the Viet Cong!57 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
It's so creative to pull your story into this poem, Bill. I love the ending especially, as true love never dies. I believe we carry it into eternity.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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It's so creative to pull your story into this poem, Bill. I love the ending especially, as true love never dies. I believe we carry it into eternity.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Hello, "AWESOME WRITER!" It is an honor having you express admiration for my work. A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my writing. All of which are appreciated. Great hearing from you. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
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You are most welcome. My best in the contest! Sal xo
Comment from January L'Angelle
I enjoyed this war and history poem. It followed the rules of the contest and it was well written. I enjoyed the intenseness of it. It really drew me in. Great job. -January L.
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I enjoyed this war and history poem. It followed the rules of the contest and it was well written. I enjoyed the intenseness of it. It really drew me in. Great job. -January L.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Beautiful smile, January L'Angelle! A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work on this poem. This has wonderful imagery and emotion, and flows together nicely. One spelling error I found:
Suddenly, in the quite night (change to quiet)
Nicely done, and best of luck on the contest,
-BT
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Great work on this poem. This has wonderful imagery and emotion, and flows together nicely. One spelling error I found:
Suddenly, in the quite night (change to quiet)
Nicely done, and best of luck on the contest,
-BT
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Greetings, BT! Great hearing from you. A "SALUTE" for the "Exceptional Review", kind words, spelling help, and taking time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
War and history comes alive in words with rhymes, the spirit of the soldiers and their valour in services to the cause is well expressed through their commitment and glory; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
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War and history comes alive in words with rhymes, the spirit of the soldiers and their valour in services to the cause is well expressed through their commitment and glory; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Greetings, ALCREATOR! Great hearing from you. A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill
Comment from Shirley McLain
Nice poem or is it a chapter. Whatever you call it, is a wonderful job. I didn't spot any errors. I look forward to reading more. Take care and stay well. Shirley
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Nice poem or is it a chapter. Whatever you call it, is a wonderful job. I didn't spot any errors. I look forward to reading more. Take care and stay well. Shirley
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Hi, Shirley! Great hearing from you. Ol' Glory is a poem, or that's what I meant it to be :)). A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words and taking time to read my work. All of which are an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from Praveen J.
Hi Bill, Thats a powerful poem. I like the way it makes a personal connection as war inevitably destroys families. Two spelling errors you should correct in the second stanza. Should be TRAIN instead of trin and WAVING instead of Waiving. Best of luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Hi Bill, Thats a powerful poem. I like the way it makes a personal connection as war inevitably destroys families. Two spelling errors you should correct in the second stanza. Should be TRAIN instead of trin and WAVING instead of Waiving. Best of luck for the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Hello, Praveen! Great hearing from you. A "SALUTE" for the excellent review, kind words, spelling expertise, and taking the time to read my work. All are an honor. Thanks for the best wishes in the contest. Wishing you an awesome weekend and may God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
Comment from Anntonette
This is so neat and well structured poem. You got a lot of talent! I love the onomatopoeia you used within this piece, it releases emotions so readers can feel this poem.
Thank you!
- Anntonette J
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reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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This is so neat and well structured poem. You got a lot of talent! I love the onomatopoeia you used within this piece, it releases emotions so readers can feel this poem.
Thank you!
- Anntonette J
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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WOW! Quite an "AWESOME" review in such a few words . . . a "SALUTE," too you, Anntonette. Beautiful name! Thanks for taking time to read my work, sweetheart. Best wishes for a magnificent weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill.
