Love Seats
A Sedoka Entry4 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
From your photograph, it would be a grand place for teh sunrise or sunset!
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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From your photograph, it would be a grand place for teh sunrise or sunset!
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This sedoka poem, At Long Last, has the proper formatting and finds that the pesky humans have finally un-assed the chairs so that a proper nap can be had. Funny.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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This sedoka poem, At Long Last, has the proper formatting and finds that the pesky humans have finally un-assed the chairs so that a proper nap can be had. Funny.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is what's on every cat's mind as they are such independent creatures who like their own space and here you brought their personality to life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Ha ha ha, this is what's on every cat's mind as they are such independent creatures who like their own space and here you brought their personality to life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this. My cats definitely are annoyed by our constant presence in their spaces with this lockdown...
Comment from tfawcus
You certainly have the two different perspectives well covered here. I can sympathise with the kitten's point of view! Guests are all very well and welcome, but their departure is equally welcomed!
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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You certainly have the two different perspectives well covered here. I can sympathise with the kitten's point of view! Guests are all very well and welcome, but their departure is equally welcomed!
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I am so happy you got the point. My cats have been beside themselves with this current lockdown situation. We are definitely in their way these days! Always nice to hear from you!
