Full Moon Magic
From any perspective, it has to be magic...21 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
You wrote a poem withe the shadows looking at night from two different perspectives. It should do well as a Sedoka Poem contest entry . Well done!
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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You wrote a poem withe the shadows looking at night from two different perspectives. It should do well as a Sedoka Poem contest entry . Well done!
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Rebecca, for your awesome review - have always loved the look of the night with a full moon!
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Oh yes, aren't they magnificent?
Comment from Bichon
A beautiful and vividly descriptive poem. The personification of the moonbeams inviting our night to dance was very well done, as was the rest of the poem. Great work!
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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A beautiful and vividly descriptive poem. The personification of the moonbeams inviting our night to dance was very well done, as was the rest of the poem. Great work!
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sedoka about the full moon that is to most of us only a light to make the night less dark, but there are many who believe the moon has more magic than we think.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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A very well-written Sedoka about the full moon that is to most of us only a light to make the night less dark, but there are many who believe the moon has more magic than we think.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Sandra!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a really beautiful poem, consisting of vivid, appealing moonlight imagery. Personification and alliteration serve as excellent enhancements to the overall effect.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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This is a really beautiful poem, consisting of vivid, appealing moonlight imagery. Personification and alliteration serve as excellent enhancements to the overall effect.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful presentation, as your words describe this beautiful scene with an image of their own, and the mystery is kept in the back ground, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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What a wonderful presentation, as your words describe this beautiful scene with an image of their own, and the mystery is kept in the back ground, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for the review and your well wishes!!
Comment from LisaMay
Oooh... I do like this! Your words paint such an air of mystery, I expect to see goblins and sprites dancing in the moonbeams. "Shards of night" is a striking image,
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Oooh... I do like this! Your words paint such an air of mystery, I expect to see goblins and sprites dancing in the moonbeams. "Shards of night" is a striking image,
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from royowen
This is an entry in the Sedoka poetry contest, an excellent example of this rather special Japanese form, that gives a superb measure of imagery, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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This is an entry in the Sedoka poetry contest, an excellent example of this rather special Japanese form, that gives a superb measure of imagery, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from tfawcus
Two different approaches to the same phenomenon, most excellently done. You have created something of the otherworldliness of moonlight filtered through trees. Magical, indeed.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Two different approaches to the same phenomenon, most excellently done. You have created something of the otherworldliness of moonlight filtered through trees. Magical, indeed.
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, Tony!
Comment from Earl Corp
I've never read a Sedona poem before. I like the two stanzas contrasting with different perspectives. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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I've never read a Sedona poem before. I like the two stanzas contrasting with different perspectives. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, Earl!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely Sedoka poem and an excellent contest entry. Your well chosen words create an atmosphere of mystery and intrigues. I enjoyed reading this one.
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reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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This is a lovely Sedoka poem and an excellent contest entry. Your well chosen words create an atmosphere of mystery and intrigues. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, Susan!
