Full Moon Magic
From any perspective, it has to be magic...21 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Very good poetry. It is well written. I like it. Congratulations on winning the contest! Well done. The rhymes are pretty good. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Very good poetry. It is well written. I like it. Congratulations on winning the contest! Well done. The rhymes are pretty good. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Raul -- have always loved the nights with a full moon! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from thoughtgame2
Very good again. I see you are very good at guideline poetry...leads me to believe you are as good without them. Great job, Thanks for sharing.I will be waiting for more.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Very good again. I see you are very good at guideline poetry...leads me to believe you are as good without them. Great job, Thanks for sharing.I will be waiting for more.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thanx so much for your review -- have always loved the nights with a full moon! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from RShipp
Excellent word choice! "Ambient" ... "Cloaked" ... "shards".
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Excellent word choice! "Ambient" ... "Cloaked" ... "shards".
You have met the requirements of a sedoka- two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Best of luck in the Sedoka Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, R -- have always loved the nights with a full moon! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Sedoka Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is beautiful. You followed the rules correctly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Sedoka Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is beautiful. You followed the rules correctly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Gypsy! I've always loved the nights with a full moon!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like what you've done with this. You've done a superb job bringing together moonlight an shadow in this. Your descriptive and well placed wording along with the beautiful artwork bring this scene to life. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I like what you've done with this. You've done a superb job bringing together moonlight an shadow in this. Your descriptive and well placed wording along with the beautiful artwork bring this scene to life. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Jeffrey! I've always loved the nights with a full moon!
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this beautiful verse of light and shadows ~ and then you combined it all together in a dance. So imaginative and a joy to read. Well done, Yvette!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I love this beautiful verse of light and shadows ~ and then you combined it all together in a dance. So imaginative and a joy to read. Well done, Yvette!!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Melissa - have always loved the look of the nights with a full moon!
Comment from Shirley McLain
Beautiful poem and an excellent setting. Your poem is perfect and I do wish you luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day. You did a great job. Take care. Shirley
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Beautiful poem and an excellent setting. Your poem is perfect and I do wish you luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day. You did a great job. Take care. Shirley
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Shirley - have always loved the look of the nights with a full moon!
Comment from Bill Schott
This sedoka poem, Full Moon Magic, has the proper formatting and brings to notice the fascinating images that light in the darkest places brings out for us.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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This sedoka poem, Full Moon Magic, has the proper formatting and brings to notice the fascinating images that light in the darkest places brings out for us.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Bill - have always loved the look of the nights with a full moon!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is a perfect description of the beautiful artwork of moon shining through the forest. It seem for pretty and eerie at the same time.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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This poem is a perfect description of the beautiful artwork of moon shining through the forest. It seem for pretty and eerie at the same time.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Joan, for your awesome review - have always loved the look of the night with a full moon!
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the moonlight here with your words as the low glow of the moon brings the mystery and the shimmer brings the dance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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You brought the moonlight here with your words as the low glow of the moon brings the mystery and the shimmer brings the dance, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your review - have always loved the look of the night with a full moon!
