Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a lovely little Sedoka poem. I was heretofore unfamiliar with the format. I think this one is a respectable contest entry. The dual pictures you chose highlight it well.

 Comment Written 05-May-2020

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reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you! This is the second one I've done in the form. I have never seen most of the forms I have on here before, so they are a fun challenge! appreciate you enjoyed :) xoxo

Comment from Veenbee

Good

I find it unique how in just a few words you are able to give the picture of a whole days' passing. Love the wording, rays of light and twinkles of starlight. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 05-May-2020

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reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Good morning! thank you for your kind review!! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo