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5-7-5 Contest Entry

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Comment from RShipp
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You have completed the requirements for a 5-syllable/ 7- syllable/ 5-syllable poem.

A great picture with your poem. Incredibly understandable and amusing!

Best of luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review, RS. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

    Ron
Comment from Mark D. R.
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This one is certainly the most humorous one posted for this contest. Luckily, my children will be doing the posting with my grandchildren. LOL. It must be especially tough for parents with school-age kids.

 Comment Written 05-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Oh, I'm sure. Same thing on this end, my daughter has to deal with this dilemma, not me. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and review, Mark. I hope everything is going good on your end.

    Ron
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Some may not find this very funny but I find it hilarious. I've worked with children my whole career. I can't imagine being locked in, especially on rainy days. That may be why my mother let us put our bathing suits on and run out into the warm rain. Or why she sent us out to make mud dams for the mud puddles. Or why she let us do many fun things. She "ran away" up the street, turned around and came in through the cellar and up the stairs. We thought we'd lost her for good. She could neither seel herself or us...that was PCL... pre-Craig's List. I am voting for this. If some of the readers are parents, you may get more votes than expected..lol

 Comment Written 05-May-2020


reply by the author on 07-May-2020
    Lol. Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Liz. Yeah, my mom did the same thing just to get us out of her hair. Haha. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and support, Liz. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. I hope you have a wonderful day.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! And send them a copy on their Insta-gram! ;) An awesome offering for the contest today, anon -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 05-May-2020


reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Yvette. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from tfawcus
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There are times when that seems a really good idea - as your accompanying picture shows! There was a lot to be said for the Edwardian idea of having the little perishers brought in for a goodnight kiss by Nanny, who had nobly been doing her Mary Poppins act all day. A bit of magic certainly helps!

 Comment Written 05-May-2020


reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Tony. I really appreciate the generous stars and hilarious comments, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a great day.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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What a funny, humorous and realistic 5-7-5 poem contest entry! Human nature is well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep posting. Good luck. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-May-2020


reply by the author on 05-May-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Alcreator. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece.