COVID=19 Be Gone
Freedom means Choice6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
It has been a while since I have read your work--welcome back if you have been on hiatus. Thank you for describing what most of us are feeling during these challenging times. Down with "oppression" but I am glad it inspired you to create this winning piece. Take good care of yourself- Joan
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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It has been a while since I have read your work--welcome back if you have been on hiatus. Thank you for describing what most of us are feeling during these challenging times. Down with "oppression" but I am glad it inspired you to create this winning piece. Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thanks Joan always good to hear from you and as I Bob in and out it is great to see read your works too. Thanks for the review and take care you yours... Hugs.. Sue
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- that's certainly a reality for many and you've written it so very well and with such an emotion of loss that it is... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Wow -- that's certainly a reality for many and you've written it so very well and with such an emotion of loss that it is... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Hallo thanks so much for taking the time to review my post. Much appreciated.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I know that this is an entry for the contest. You chose well to chose freedom as the theme of your story, related to the Covid-19 virus.
I hope that in reality, you can see some sparks of light and hope though, not all is so completely black.
Let's be thankful that we have a telephone and Internet, so we can communicate with each other. You can write and post and share your thoughts with others. If you believe and have faith, you can pray. You don't have to be completely alone. It will all end, and, maybe different, maybe even better, we shall see our friends and family again. But let's be careful for now.
Take care, be safe.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I know that this is an entry for the contest. You chose well to chose freedom as the theme of your story, related to the Covid-19 virus.
I hope that in reality, you can see some sparks of light and hope though, not all is so completely black.
Let's be thankful that we have a telephone and Internet, so we can communicate with each other. You can write and post and share your thoughts with others. If you believe and have faith, you can pray. You don't have to be completely alone. It will all end, and, maybe different, maybe even better, we shall see our friends and family again. But let's be careful for now.
Take care, be safe.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thank you muchly for your kind review and words... Very appreciated. Take care stay safe too.
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an outstanding flash text, with an illustration that complements the words to perfection. The form "I miss... then the explanation" is particularly moving, and has allowed the author to pack several things missed into the short length allowed. The things missed are extremely serious, no trivia here, and concern what we have always taken for granted as human rights issues. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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This is an outstanding flash text, with an illustration that complements the words to perfection. The form "I miss... then the explanation" is particularly moving, and has allowed the author to pack several things missed into the short length allowed. The things missed are extremely serious, no trivia here, and concern what we have always taken for granted as human rights issues. Well done!
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks so much for you detailed review and input.. Much appreciated.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very sad story. I understand that freedom is important to all of us. It is precious. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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This is a very sad story. I understand that freedom is important to all of us. It is precious. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for your kind review.. Much appreciated.
Comment from January L'Angelle
I like the way you made your story rhyme and it tells the way everyone is feeling right now. Covid 19 is keeping everyone inside and preventing us from doing what we are used to doing. This story is more truth than fiction. Well penned. -January L.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I like the way you made your story rhyme and it tells the way everyone is feeling right now. Covid 19 is keeping everyone inside and preventing us from doing what we are used to doing. This story is more truth than fiction. Well penned. -January L.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for your time and review.. Much appreciated.
