God loves me, Man loves me not
Free verse poetry3 total reviews
Comment from Elon Vaughn
I like what you have written and believe this is so true. I can't think of anything to suggest an improvement, however, the background color is a bit dark and made for difficult reading. Old eyes.
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I like what you have written and believe this is so true. I can't think of anything to suggest an improvement, however, the background color is a bit dark and made for difficult reading. Old eyes.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
Comment from poetwatch
God loves me also which is pure and true. I worry not what the future will be for His love will set me free. Love is the floodgates of heaven surging through my heart, from him I shall never depart. "True love is generous; / And it begs no reward." just your love in return. Thank you for sharing. This is a good offering for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not contest.
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God loves me also which is pure and true. I worry not what the future will be for His love will set me free. Love is the floodgates of heaven surging through my heart, from him I shall never depart. "True love is generous; / And it begs no reward." just your love in return. Thank you for sharing. This is a good offering for the He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
Comment from dragonpoet
Only humans have the choice of He love's my not. This shows the difference be human love and Divine love. If all earthy love was
true eternal love than there would be no need for divorce lawyers.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
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Only humans have the choice of He love's my not. This shows the difference be human love and Divine love. If all earthy love was
true eternal love than there would be no need for divorce lawyers.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-May-2020
