Moving On
Perhaps you just need to hear their voice one more time...23 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
That's a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. I can't imagine what I would think if this happened to me, but it's a beautiful thought, and I do believe those who have crossed over to the other side, find a way to communicate with those of us still here.
All the very best. I found no errors in your work.
Jan
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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That's a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. I can't imagine what I would think if this happened to me, but it's a beautiful thought, and I do believe those who have crossed over to the other side, find a way to communicate with those of us still here.
All the very best. I found no errors in your work.
Jan
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Jan. I'm so glad you enjoyed Camille's story!
Comment from tfawcus
A poem supercharged with emotion; first the tragedy, then the denial, and then the final acceptance. Poor old Steve sure had to work hard to get her to pick up the 'phone'!
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reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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A poem supercharged with emotion; first the tragedy, then the denial, and then the final acceptance. Poor old Steve sure had to work hard to get her to pick up the 'phone'!
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Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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It on took three tries, yeah? Thank you for your review, Tony!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wow--what a punch at the end. This is poignant and powerful; the theme of letting go told as through the voice from the shell is well conveyed. You may have a winner! Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Wow--what a punch at the end. This is poignant and powerful; the theme of letting go told as through the voice from the shell is well conveyed. You may have a winner! Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging review, LIZ! I'm so glad you enjoyed Camille's story!
