Oh Life!
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Comment from Raul1
If everything is perfect,then everyone would be boring. I think it's normal to make mistakes. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
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If everything is perfect,then everyone would be boring. I think it's normal to make mistakes. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
God forbid if we were all perfect. The world would indeed be a boring place. I don't think it ever God's intension to make us perfect. He takes us as we come. Ulla:)))
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God forbid if we were all perfect. The world would indeed be a boring place. I don't think it ever God's intension to make us perfect. He takes us as we come. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from rspoet
This is a poem based on the old over used statement: "to err is human."
God, being omniscient, does not err, not in a human sense.
Interesting wording of your theme.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
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This is a poem based on the old over used statement: "to err is human."
God, being omniscient, does not err, not in a human sense.
Interesting wording of your theme.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
I believe in the saying that "nobody's perfect". I don't think God expects us to be, although we should probably strive for it. That being said, I'm not sure I'd want to live in a perfect world...just a peaceful one. Well done once again, thanks for sharing. :)
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I believe in the saying that "nobody's perfect". I don't think God expects us to be, although we should probably strive for it. That being said, I'm not sure I'd want to live in a perfect world...just a peaceful one. Well done once again, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Cat Merto
God is pure and perfect
We should all follow in his word of the lord ,and just maybe this could help the world be a better
I love your insight to the lord.
CAT
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God is pure and perfect
We should all follow in his word of the lord ,and just maybe this could help the world be a better
I love your insight to the lord.
CAT
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
Even in a non-religious aspect it is important to remember to be humble and that perfection is perception. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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Even in a non-religious aspect it is important to remember to be humble and that perfection is perception. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
God knows we are not perfect, and He understands like any parent. To err is Human, and that is a fact and nothing will ever change it. We could never be perfect no matter how much we tried. Well done. Sandra
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God knows we are not perfect, and He understands like any parent. To err is Human, and that is a fact and nothing will ever change it. We could never be perfect no matter how much we tried. Well done. Sandra
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from RGstar
Look. I am saying this to you as a friend. I know many think it but do not say it.
The old poems you are posting and flooding the front age with have adverse effect from what they should. You shouldn't be flooding the front page with them. There is a rotation system, and some authors do not have the money to even place their work on the front page. A lot of your work has grammatical challenges, and why not write one work and post which others will appreciate, and so read, rather than buy a way forward, because it may be that your work is not read, but the collection of the 120 dollars for each, orchestrates kind words just to get your dollars, and in many ways defeat the object of the exercise. The word of God cannot be bought to forward an agenda, it has to be given and consumed without force. What you are doing there is called spamming...flooding, has nothing to do with poetry. I myself have enough money to put how many poems I want on the first page, but I realise a rotation system, and it should be a variety, and of a mixture and quality not bound by dollars, but bound by excellence in each their own right. There should be a variety otherwise it becomes counter productive. An author's goal is to have their work read and enjoyed, should never be a source of force, but a taste of something that all would like to partake, rather than despair of. A poem should never teach, only interpreted, tasted and enjoyed, to be read again and again. The way you are flooding the front page on both side questions your seriousness. It is your right yes, as you please, but let us make the site attractive...give and take. Your word will be read more for quality, not quantity. I am not sure of your agenda, but I would suggest writing something new, spend sometime checking the grammar and present in its glory, so all can enjoy. The way that you are doing now is counterproductive and does not put you, or God, in a good light. Be humble with his name, not forceful. Like a cloud or a breeze, let words be read, not like a hurricane when all close their doors.
Best wishes.
Have a great week
RGstar
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Look. I am saying this to you as a friend. I know many think it but do not say it.
The old poems you are posting and flooding the front age with have adverse effect from what they should. You shouldn't be flooding the front page with them. There is a rotation system, and some authors do not have the money to even place their work on the front page. A lot of your work has grammatical challenges, and why not write one work and post which others will appreciate, and so read, rather than buy a way forward, because it may be that your work is not read, but the collection of the 120 dollars for each, orchestrates kind words just to get your dollars, and in many ways defeat the object of the exercise. The word of God cannot be bought to forward an agenda, it has to be given and consumed without force. What you are doing there is called spamming...flooding, has nothing to do with poetry. I myself have enough money to put how many poems I want on the first page, but I realise a rotation system, and it should be a variety, and of a mixture and quality not bound by dollars, but bound by excellence in each their own right. There should be a variety otherwise it becomes counter productive. An author's goal is to have their work read and enjoyed, should never be a source of force, but a taste of something that all would like to partake, rather than despair of. A poem should never teach, only interpreted, tasted and enjoyed, to be read again and again. The way you are flooding the front page on both side questions your seriousness. It is your right yes, as you please, but let us make the site attractive...give and take. Your word will be read more for quality, not quantity. I am not sure of your agenda, but I would suggest writing something new, spend sometime checking the grammar and present in its glory, so all can enjoy. The way that you are doing now is counterproductive and does not put you, or God, in a good light. Be humble with his name, not forceful. Like a cloud or a breeze, let words be read, not like a hurricane when all close their doors.
Best wishes.
Have a great week
RGstar
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Very correctly put although in an unusual fashion. Another creative poem. The fault lies within us who think we can never err. A man with a conscience will admit his error and take corrective action. He should realize that God is watching him. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed.
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Very correctly put although in an unusual fashion. Another creative poem. The fault lies within us who think we can never err. A man with a conscience will admit his error and take corrective action. He should realize that God is watching him. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful sentiment and message for all, your second line is only 6 syllables , this may need correcting, overall an excellent read****kahpot
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Wonderful sentiment and message for all, your second line is only 6 syllables , this may need correcting, overall an excellent read****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
