Oh Life!
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Comment from dragonpoet
Although some think they are perfect or can create a perfect world, it is not humanly possible. Only God is perfect. But we can make the world the best that we can.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
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Although some think they are perfect or can create a perfect world, it is not humanly possible. Only God is perfect. But we can make the world the best that we can.
Keep writng and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Sandra C. Johnston
Well said with such restriction. The nuances were delightful. Keep on 'aspiring'. You are on your way it's sounds to trying to understand the Unmoved Mover. Remember that you are a reflection of divine energy.
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Well said with such restriction. The nuances were delightful. Keep on 'aspiring'. You are on your way it's sounds to trying to understand the Unmoved Mover. Remember that you are a reflection of divine energy.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
I am studying the Apostles Creed with my Sunday School class right now Your 5-7-5-7-7- poem speaks of a perfect God who created us perfectly and yet we are not perfect.
"Errors" is an Interesting read.
Blessings
Janet
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I am studying the Apostles Creed with my Sunday School class right now Your 5-7-5-7-7- poem speaks of a perfect God who created us perfectly and yet we are not perfect.
"Errors" is an Interesting read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from wilbs
I thought the error about the background being incomplete was absolutely brilliant to the whole scheme of it all, for if it was perfect, that would unreal, base on the truth, we can only be a messenger of God's perfect work. But I thought that was almost perfect, great job
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I thought the error about the background being incomplete was absolutely brilliant to the whole scheme of it all, for if it was perfect, that would unreal, base on the truth, we can only be a messenger of God's perfect work. But I thought that was almost perfect, great job
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from amahra
This is a very lovely poem exalting our Heavenly Father Who is perfect in every way. Indeed man is not perfect and needs God's forgiveness when we fall short of his expectations.
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This is a very lovely poem exalting our Heavenly Father Who is perfect in every way. Indeed man is not perfect and needs God's forgiveness when we fall short of his expectations.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, we have our free will. God is perfect and doesn't make mistakes. Our goal should be to become as close to God as we can. With His help we can be. The world would be much better. Thank you for sharing.
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Yes, we have our free will. God is perfect and doesn't make mistakes. Our goal should be to become as close to God as we can. With His help we can be. The world would be much better. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Errors!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice 5/7/5/7/7, not a Tanka, about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Errors!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice 5/7/5/7/7, not a Tanka, about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from pome lover
Dear Sir - I don't know what you mean by a standard member, but I have been a member for a number of years and enjoyed your poetry and your critiques of my work.
I think I understand your meaning here - which is true, that God is perfect and man is not.
My only question is that your second line has only 6 syllables.
However, congratulations on All Time Best! and for being recognized.
Katharine - pome lover
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Dear Sir - I don't know what you mean by a standard member, but I have been a member for a number of years and enjoyed your poetry and your critiques of my work.
I think I understand your meaning here - which is true, that God is perfect and man is not.
My only question is that your second line has only 6 syllables.
However, congratulations on All Time Best! and for being recognized.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Zan Zan
Serving up these five stars.
All glory and praise to Yahweh. To him alone.
I liked this, I like anything with Abba in it.
This piece is different.
All the best to you and your writings
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Serving up these five stars.
All glory and praise to Yahweh. To him alone.
I liked this, I like anything with Abba in it.
This piece is different.
All the best to you and your writings
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
We learn through our mistakes. If we were born perfect and all knowing and all able, how would we ever progress? What would we ever do? Just live the same perfect life day after day?
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We learn through our mistakes. If we were born perfect and all knowing and all able, how would we ever progress? What would we ever do? Just live the same perfect life day after day?
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
