Oh Life!
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Comment from TPAC
I found your statement very profound, giving a thought to consider in mind, reasoning the acclaimed perfection of God. The ideal of heaven becomes the thought: Angel and Adam dwelling in a created heaven as God.
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I found your statement very profound, giving a thought to consider in mind, reasoning the acclaimed perfection of God. The ideal of heaven becomes the thought: Angel and Adam dwelling in a created heaven as God.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
If man were perfect
this world would be unreal
unlike of today
To err is fate, wink not God
who's lone perfect since Day One
Awesome my man.
Take care, Pete
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Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
If man were perfect
this world would be unreal
unlike of today
To err is fate, wink not God
who's lone perfect since Day One
Awesome my man.
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I get the gist of the message about man being flawed, God being perfect--a universal theme--unexpected phrasing--wink not God--what does that mean? I'm confused.
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I get the gist of the message about man being flawed, God being perfect--a universal theme--unexpected phrasing--wink not God--what does that mean? I'm confused.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To err is to be human, we will forever make mistakes and we like all creatures on this earth will continue making errors, some we learn from and some we repeat, no one is perfect, except our Maker, love Dolly x
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To err is to be human, we will forever make mistakes and we like all creatures on this earth will continue making errors, some we learn from and some we repeat, no one is perfect, except our Maker, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from pharp
My Friend,
Your words speak the truth, a powerful message, as well as your author's notes. True, "if man were perfect, this world would be unreal, unlike of today." There is none perfect, only our Father in Heaven.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
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My Friend,
Your words speak the truth, a powerful message, as well as your author's notes. True, "if man were perfect, this world would be unreal, unlike of today." There is none perfect, only our Father in Heaven.
Thanks for sharing.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
Comment from Eunice Amero
Good poem. Yes God is prefect. Man has failed Him. Good idea. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing. Hope you win. Never let a day go by without writing something.
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Good poem. Yes God is prefect. Man has failed Him. Good idea. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing. Hope you win. Never let a day go by without writing something.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Some think they are perfect and act as if they are perfect, but news bulletin, there has only ever been one perfect person and that is the Lord. When we humble ourselves to accept that we are not perfect we will then strive harder to become as close to perfect as we can be. Good job!
Patty
p.s. I think I fall into the category to write a review for you :)
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Some think they are perfect and act as if they are perfect, but news bulletin, there has only ever been one perfect person and that is the Lord. When we humble ourselves to accept that we are not perfect we will then strive harder to become as close to perfect as we can be. Good job!
Patty
p.s. I think I fall into the category to write a review for you :)
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hello, Alcreator!
I truly enjoyed this poem. I agree with it too. No one gets that 'perfect' thing right. It's a good thing we have a perfect God!
YOu followed your goal of 5-7-5-7-7- very well and the poem flowed and was a great read for a Saturday evening.
thank you for sharing,
Blessings,
Deb
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Hello, Alcreator!
I truly enjoyed this poem. I agree with it too. No one gets that 'perfect' thing right. It's a good thing we have a perfect God!
YOu followed your goal of 5-7-5-7-7- very well and the poem flowed and was a great read for a Saturday evening.
thank you for sharing,
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
A perfect God made man in His image, but man is not God, and therefore not perfect. But...God will keep the man in PERFECT PIECE, whose mind is stayed on God, because God trusts such a man. (Isaiah 26:3) Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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A perfect God made man in His image, but man is not God, and therefore not perfect. But...God will keep the man in PERFECT PIECE, whose mind is stayed on God, because God trusts such a man. (Isaiah 26:3) Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is deeply spiritual and excellent in its message about the inperfections of man. The only perfect element IN man is the Lord who saved them and gave them His Spirit.
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Your poem is deeply spiritual and excellent in its message about the inperfections of man. The only perfect element IN man is the Lord who saved them and gave them His Spirit.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
