Oh Life!
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Comment from tuskantail
Man is by no means perfect, but yes, there is one who is as you say. I enjoyed this tanka even though I must admit I am not a tanka fan. Probably due to the fact I am a woman and like to dribble on!
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Man is by no means perfect, but yes, there is one who is as you say. I enjoyed this tanka even though I must admit I am not a tanka fan. Probably due to the fact I am a woman and like to dribble on!
Comment Written 13-May-2006
Comment from Doreen Dulally
Smiles I to believe no ones perfect
I myself have written a couple of poems using syllables
The only thing I have against them is there so short
Even if ................direct
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Smiles I to believe no ones perfect
I myself have written a couple of poems using syllables
The only thing I have against them is there so short
Even if ................direct
Comment Written 13-May-2006
Comment from WorstPoetic Reviewer
Yes, man is mortal and bound to make mistakes. This Tanka speaks the right thing in a right manner in right words in a very short space and within a few words so clearly. Man's error habit is natural and destined. God is only error-free. True feeling in true order put here enjoyed.
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Yes, man is mortal and bound to make mistakes. This Tanka speaks the right thing in a right manner in right words in a very short space and within a few words so clearly. Man's error habit is natural and destined. God is only error-free. True feeling in true order put here enjoyed.
Comment Written 13-May-2006
Comment from fastdigits
An easy message that everyone can attest to, no one is perfect, we all have our frailties, sometimes hidden away in the deep recesses of our mind.
Well done
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An easy message that everyone can attest to, no one is perfect, we all have our frailties, sometimes hidden away in the deep recesses of our mind.
Well done
Comment Written 12-May-2006
Comment from KRHolbrook
You know, I find it amazing how in so short of words you can point out a key flaw in everyone. Nobody is perfect and you have described it without, or with, perhaps in someone's eye, a flaw.
Great poem.
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You know, I find it amazing how in so short of words you can point out a key flaw in everyone. Nobody is perfect and you have described it without, or with, perhaps in someone's eye, a flaw.
Great poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2006
Comment from Frank Furter
you write such words of wisdom and that give out such great thoughts for me this writing was more about thinking than reading . and your work is inspiring what could be my next writing . thank you for sharing your work
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you write such words of wisdom and that give out such great thoughts for me this writing was more about thinking than reading . and your work is inspiring what could be my next writing . thank you for sharing your work
Comment Written 11-May-2006
Comment from luna
I keep a different ideology but will rate your poem according to the FS guidelines. The form and format are perfect, as is the syllable count. You have yourself a correctly produced American Tanka poem here, thus the five star rating, no matter whether I agree with what you say or not, it is a well written poem and deserves a five star rating.
Yours,
Jenny *smile*
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I keep a different ideology but will rate your poem according to the FS guidelines. The form and format are perfect, as is the syllable count. You have yourself a correctly produced American Tanka poem here, thus the five star rating, no matter whether I agree with what you say or not, it is a well written poem and deserves a five star rating.
Yours,
Jenny *smile*
Comment Written 11-May-2006
Comment from TrueBeliever
Free is the soul who admits his flaws
Free is the soul who believes in He
Free is the soul who learns from their mistakes
Free is the soul on any given day.
This is a solid write. TB
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Free is the soul who admits his flaws
Free is the soul who believes in He
Free is the soul who learns from their mistakes
Free is the soul on any given day.
This is a solid write. TB
Comment Written 08-Apr-2006
Comment from National Scholar
SUPERB! Such a Tanka with the truths that man is mortal and man and not God and man is bound to imperfection, commit mistakes and is full of errors. What a clear message in such a short space! I wish a grand success of this Author and his works at this site.
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SUPERB! Such a Tanka with the truths that man is mortal and man and not God and man is bound to imperfection, commit mistakes and is full of errors. What a clear message in such a short space! I wish a grand success of this Author and his works at this site.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2006
Comment from Snitz
Hi,
Extreemly thought provoking. Short and to the point. Kudos to ya.. I enjoyed it.
Snitz
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Hi,
Extreemly thought provoking. Short and to the point. Kudos to ya.. I enjoyed it.
Snitz
Comment Written 05-Apr-2006
