Sweet Dreams
Nature's time of renewal begins...27 total reviews
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
I think this is the best of these I've read. It's so descriptive and all the words not only work well together they sound like the belong along side each other. Each one adding it's own little bit
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I think this is the best of these I've read. It's so descriptive and all the words not only work well together they sound like the belong along side each other. Each one adding it's own little bit
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks for dropping by for this wonderful review - have a Fabulous Friday!
Comment from dmt1967
This poem paints a picture of wintery day with a supportive picturesque picture in the background. A day like that reminds me of hot chocolate and hot water bottles. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This poem paints a picture of wintery day with a supportive picturesque picture in the background. A day like that reminds me of hot chocolate and hot water bottles. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Stay safe.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks for dropping by for the review - have a Fabulous Friday!
Comment from Ogden
Impressive writing, anonymous poet!
You have compiled an excellent assortment of attributes, alliteration, imagery, and metaphor (plus a striking illustration) that may well add up to a contest winner!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Impressive writing, anonymous poet!
You have compiled an excellent assortment of attributes, alliteration, imagery, and metaphor (plus a striking illustration) that may well add up to a contest winner!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Oh, you flatterer you! Thanks for the wonderful review and have a Fabulous Friday!
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You're very welcome!
Don
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ambient write filled with the chill of winter and the frosted scenes that look quaint but can bring with it a bitter biting wind, an atmospheric write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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An ambient write filled with the chill of winter and the frosted scenes that look quaint but can bring with it a bitter biting wind, an atmospheric write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks for dropping by for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!
Comment from Alchera
Ode To Winter: delicate as a touch of an artist's brush and masterfully described through the bursting force of the cold winds that arrive, bringing with it the blanket of white snow so that Mother Earth can regenerate and produce new fruits in spring.
Gorgeous! I love it!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Ode To Winter: delicate as a touch of an artist's brush and masterfully described through the bursting force of the cold winds that arrive, bringing with it the blanket of white snow so that Mother Earth can regenerate and produce new fruits in spring.
Gorgeous! I love it!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Wow!! Such a wonderful review surrounded by those shining stars - thank you so much!! ;) Here's sending you wishes for a spectacular weekend!
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You are always welcomed and blessings, dearest friend of mine Tony
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the winter 5-7-5 ode.
We just finished with winter and I don't to see it return any time soon,
but your description is excellent.
Excellent picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the winter 5-7-5 ode.
We just finished with winter and I don't to see it return any time soon,
but your description is excellent.
Excellent picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your review this evening - much appreciated!
Comment from ISTHATAONE
Ok, I am confused.. is this prompt or a poem? Oh I guess it is a poem. I like the "quilt", cause it brings up tactile memories.
The rest leaves me cold.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Ok, I am confused.. is this prompt or a poem? Oh I guess it is a poem. I like the "quilt", cause it brings up tactile memories.
The rest leaves me cold.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Could you please explain what needs to be fixed? According to the FanStory rating system (given below), you have rated this 5-7-5 BELOW a rating that needs correction but you have not given any problems with the meeting of the writing prompt and the poem type. The fact that it leaves you cold and it's supposed to be about winter would mean that it was much better than an average rating, yes?? Please explain what needs correcting. Thank you.
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