Sweet Dreams
Nature's time of renewal begins...27 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Yes, winter is the regeneration and virtual hibernation and restoration for the new life's production of the spring, it's like Christ lying three days in the grave, although he was elsewhere preaching to the captives, to rise again. Beautifully written, love white quilts metaphor, well done blessings Roy
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Yes, winter is the regeneration and virtual hibernation and restoration for the new life's production of the spring, it's like Christ lying three days in the grave, although he was elsewhere preaching to the captives, to rise again. Beautifully written, love white quilts metaphor, well done blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by for the review and have a Fabulous Friday evening!
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Well donen
Comment from sunnilicious
This was a short but regal ode. Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Good alliterations with regenerative-rest and winds white. Nice visual imagery. Majestic. Good luck in the contest :)
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This was a short but regal ode. Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Good alliterations with regenerative-rest and winds white. Nice visual imagery. Majestic. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Comment from Therese Caron
This is a lovely ode to winter. Your image is stunning. I love the last line about frosted white quilts. This is a peaceful, restful poem, expertly written. Good luck in the contest!
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This is a lovely ode to winter. Your image is stunning. I love the last line about frosted white quilts. This is a peaceful, restful poem, expertly written. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Comment from June Sargent
Nothing more comforting than a soft, fluffy quilt on a cold winter's night. Your imagery captured that as the earth sleeps quietly neath the snow. Well done!
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Nothing more comforting than a soft, fluffy quilt on a cold winter's night. Your imagery captured that as the earth sleeps quietly neath the snow. Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sweet Dreams
Hello my friend
Oooo....I love your ode to winter. It's haikuish in the best sense. Very nice presentation too. Great imagery. Well done.
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Sweet Dreams
Hello my friend
Oooo....I love your ode to winter. It's haikuish in the best sense. Very nice presentation too. Great imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Hooray - an ay-okay from Ms. Gypsy!! Thanks for dropping in for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. The poem
reminds me of winter in New York. The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line put it all together! Have a great weelend!
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The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. The poem
reminds me of winter in New York. The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line put it all together! Have a great weelend!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Thanks for dropping by for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to winter that us needed for the earth to rest until Spring comes back and the earth and nature wake-up well rested and renewed to start the cycle once again.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to winter that us needed for the earth to rest until Spring comes back and the earth and nature wake-up well rested and renewed to start the cycle once again.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Comment from zanya
yes a real sense of the approach of the dormant season of the year here in this Ode to Winter as earth rests from her labours - and a lovely description of the earth under snow
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yes a real sense of the approach of the dormant season of the year here in this Ode to Winter as earth rests from her labours - and a lovely description of the earth under snow
Comment Written 01-May-2020
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery that paints
a vivid word picture of winter.
-Good use of alliteration, and
a very good concluding line,
personifying the snow as
"frosted white quilts."
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery that paints
a vivid word picture of winter.
-Good use of alliteration, and
a very good concluding line,
personifying the snow as
"frosted white quilts."
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!
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You are very welcome, and you have a great Friday and upcoming weekend, too!
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S'okay as long as your family doesn't find out and NEVER let you live it down!! ;) :) :)
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Comment from Rmocruz
Your free flowing words present colorful imagery of our snow blanketed earth in winter's grasp. An appropriate winter scene enhances your theme.
A most promising writing prompt entry.
Best Wishes!
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Your free flowing words present colorful imagery of our snow blanketed earth in winter's grasp. An appropriate winter scene enhances your theme.
A most promising writing prompt entry.
Best Wishes!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks for dropping by for the review and have a Fabulous Friday!
