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Seventeen Syllable Smile

Crafted just for your smiling foodie fantasy...

21 total reviews 
Comment from harmony13
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The first two line of this poem flow and connect well. The last
line puts it all together! I am thinking about this delicious
desert right now! The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem. Have a great weekend!

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    And I hope you're smiling! Thanks so much for the review, Harmony!
Comment from June Sargent
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Ok - you really know how to tempt us. So much for dieting. That combination just oozes with decadence! I am definitely going to try that...this weekend. Smile.

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    You can't diet when you're 'stuck inside'.... it'll have to wait!! Just enjoy the yumminess and smile (oh, and hummmm around the spoon - lol!). Thank you for the review, June!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Seventeen Syllable Smile

Hello my friend

Excellent entry for the
Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt contest. I love the presentation too. Good syllable count. Great connection between lines.

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    Thank you!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem about making waffles and ice-cream a definite favourite of mine too even when I know it will make me feel sick afterwards it is still worth it.

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    Lol! We do crazy things for our 'yummies' don't we? Thanks for your review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness that looks so naughty and delicious! And all homemade, your words are mouth-wateringly good and I need to eat something sweet right now! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    But naughty can be yummy, too! Thank you for your review!
Comment from humpwhistle
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Now, that's my idea of the Breakfast of Champions! Puts the old corn flake habit to shame. Personally, though, I could do without the waffle.
I happen to like my ice cream straight.
Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 01-May-2020

reply by the author on 01-May-2020
    Now, now, Lee... don't knock it till you try it - lol! 😉 Thanks for your review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Looks really good! Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your words and picture pair nicely. Thanks for sharing [your writing and the waffle]. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Thank you!!
Comment from LisaMay
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Now this is just cruelty!! I don't have any of those ingredients and you've put the thought into my head and it is tormenting me. I'm glad YOU had some perverse fun-filled pleasure writing these irresistible lines, and drooling over the picture.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    No offense was meant. I apologize if you took it as such. Thank you for your review, and may you have a good evening.
reply by LisaMay on 30-Apr-2020
    Hahaha... offence?? They were facetious comments of mine. How could I be offended by such sweet fantasies.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Was thinking that was the case but a number of new members seem to really be...shall we say "sensitive"...
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hello,

What a delicious photo and poem? I like the sugary words you used. My husband would love those words, and what's in the picture. He loves any type of sweets. You met the poem requirement. Thanks. I like it. Good job!! Happy writing:-)

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Thank you for the fun review, joyce - have a wonderful evening!
reply by joycetreasures on 30-Apr-2020
    You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Whoever you are, we
are on the same wave length.
-Check out my poem on Sun.!
-Great image and nice
presentation.
-You are my kind of person with
ice cream on a waffle!
-Good syllable count, great topic,
and delectable imagery.
-The only problem is it is
late in the evening, and this
has made me hungry!
-Good luck in the contest:)

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    LOL!! Thank you, Pam, for the awesome review -- the contest said to make folks smile... I can't think of anything better than this, can you?! LOL! Will check in on that Sun poem...
reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Apr-2020
    No, I can't think of anything better. This definitely deserves a win and a smile😊