"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Same House? (A)"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from joann r romei
this was a very emotional poem /short story, I felt the pain and I can relate in the sadness that humans feel, for one tragic situation or another ,
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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this was a very emotional poem /short story, I felt the pain and I can relate in the sadness that humans feel, for one tragic situation or another ,
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks Joanne for your kind thoughts and review.
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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, Moving story from the thoughts of your dead son, I like the way you could imagine what he must be thinking. The innocence of your 18 year old son came out in the lines "Yes God never hurt a thing, not even a mouse." Dove
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Dear Ricky, Moving story from the thoughts of your dead son, I like the way you could imagine what he must be thinking. The innocence of your 18 year old son came out in the lines "Yes God never hurt a thing, not even a mouse." Dove
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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The Dovemarie for your kind words and
Review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from January L'Angelle
Heart breaking poem. I think that this poem is special. It is written in the first person through the eyes of the deceased. It is like we are getting a view into the mind of what its like to pass on and the pain that is felt with it. Well done. -January L.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Heart breaking poem. I think that this poem is special. It is written in the first person through the eyes of the deceased. It is like we are getting a view into the mind of what its like to pass on and the pain that is felt with it. Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thanks January for your kind words and
Review.
Doctor Ricky 1024