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Bonds of Love

A Senryu

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Comment from LisaMay
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Congratulations on your placing in the contest with this observation. (Such a cute illustration, too.) It is a pleasing result of lockdown for some lovers that they have drawn closer, emphasising other aspects of their relationship as well as the physical.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-May-2020
    Thanks for reading and those interesting comments zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Too bad the social distance doesn't apply inside the house... :) :) A great offering for the senryu contest - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you! ;)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-May-2020
    Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Laurie Holding
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Cute. And so true, in these weird days of not being able to be with friends or to make new acquaintances! We're left to our own people, and making the best of it. Thanks for capturing that in very few words.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-May-2020
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Lovers wish to forge stronger bonds of love but social distancing has been evident and compulsory these days, whither bond stands? well said, well done.

This is not a Senryu of Human Haiku for there is no human foibles in the poem, mention of human nature is not enough, moreover, social distancing is an act imposed by the society for activation.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 02-May-2020
    Thanks for reading zanya