Mirror, Mirror
A reflected acrostic entry for the contest35 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I love the concept here. Your writing is also mirrored. That is very clever and the poetry itself echoes from the present back to the past. I've not seen this before. I believe it deserves six stars
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I love the concept here. Your writing is also mirrored. That is very clever and the poetry itself echoes from the present back to the past. I've not seen this before. I believe it deserves six stars
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much, bob, for this wonderful review - those stars are such an awesome sight this morning! Have a beautiful day out there!!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Mirror, Mirror", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Mirror, Mirror", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image is super. I like the color scheme and how you used it to your advantage by highlighting the first letter in white. Your rhymes are great and the message is clear. I like the contrast between the two verse, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. The image is super. I like the color scheme and how you used it to your advantage by highlighting the first letter in white. Your rhymes are great and the message is clear. I like the contrast between the two verse, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Jan, for such a wonderful review - you made my evening!
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your poem is an excellent item for the contest. It was an ingenious way to compose also. I see this working for you in the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Your poem is an excellent item for the contest. It was an ingenious way to compose also. I see this working for you in the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for comments!!!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful poem. We can be beautiful, experience beauty at any age. Your poem is well worded and illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This is a wonderful poem. We can be beautiful, experience beauty at any age. Your poem is well worded and illustrated. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. Time and the mirror are constantly marching on unfazed by atmospheric conditions or our protests. You've done a fine job in expressing how our lives change
through the mirror's looking glass. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I like this. Time and the mirror are constantly marching on unfazed by atmospheric conditions or our protests. You've done a fine job in expressing how our lives change
through the mirror's looking glass. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Jeffrey - always good to hear from you!!
Comment from Mark Schardine
Imbibe the joy of life carefree...
Mirror, mirror . . . there, now I see!
Thank you for this witty and clever poem!
I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Imbibe the joy of life carefree...
Mirror, mirror . . . there, now I see!
Thank you for this witty and clever poem!
I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this awesome review, Justin - your words and your fun scuba pic are both so welcome this morning!! Take care out there!
Comment from Justin Chopin
A very lyrical piece of poetry. I liked how you have the first part of your fantastic acrostic going forwards and then the second part of your piece going backwards but were still able to utilize your rhymes and sentiments to make them gel together as a poem. Very relatable because I find myself longing to go back to those simplistic and idyllic days of youth were everything seemed so easy and carefree. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A very lyrical piece of poetry. I liked how you have the first part of your fantastic acrostic going forwards and then the second part of your piece going backwards but were still able to utilize your rhymes and sentiments to make them gel together as a poem. Very relatable because I find myself longing to go back to those simplistic and idyllic days of youth were everything seemed so easy and carefree. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you for this awesome review, Justin - your words and your bright smile there are both so welcome this morning!! Take care out there!
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You're welcome.
Comment from HansiJ
I love the flow of your poem. Once innocent hearts are hidden behind masks. The masks will fall only in front of the mirror when no one else is watching.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I love the flow of your poem. Once innocent hearts are hidden behind masks. The masks will fall only in front of the mirror when no one else is watching.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Many thanks for your wonderful comments!
Comment from Cindy Decker
I really like your acrostic mirror,mirror poem. I thought like the young reflection years ago, now I am a bit wiser, yet unnecessarily cynical. We have such wonderful ideals when we're younger; as adults we make compromises in our thoughts and ideals. It really is a beautiful poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I really like your acrostic mirror,mirror poem. I thought like the young reflection years ago, now I am a bit wiser, yet unnecessarily cynical. We have such wonderful ideals when we're younger; as adults we make compromises in our thoughts and ideals. It really is a beautiful poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Many thanks for your fantastic comments, Cindy - so glad you really understood. Made my day!!
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You?re welcome.once again, an excellent poem!
