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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent job on this well written poem! If I were to change one thing it would be the size of the font;-) I would make the font a little smaller as it is just a bit to big right now!

EXCELLENT job!
Thanks so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks Melodie will work on the font. I did wonder.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 02-Jul-2020
    ;-)
Comment from Ben Colder
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I see nothing wrong with letting out a little steam every once in a while. You have a certain way of saying what I think many fell.
Elvis sang a song one time called. "Money Honey!"

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Amen or Oh me, Bro. A few reviewers have appreciated my warning of the great waste of money the book baloons are. Just money for Tom and that's it!
reply by Ben Colder on 02-Jul-2020
    W.C. Fields said once. "A sucker is born every minute!"
    Stay safe down there. Keep your Kangaroo tied down.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Thanks mate. Make sure I am up on your new chapters
Comment from BethShelby
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I wondered if those Book Balloons did anything at all. However I didn't have anything on on my book each chapter only paid two cents but one person just decided she wasn't to read the whole thing from the beginning and she did. All fortty-six chapters. I bought my rating way up. I also don't think some of those certificate do anything.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
    Well said Sis and I am glad someone did what the purpose of the book balloon is but most don't and it costs way to much to waste.
Comment from Sally Law
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"I get by with a little help from my friends," comes to mind here, Geoff. I suppose a book balloon is a treasure chest and member cent pump sold here in FanStory. It does get expensive. My main pumps are for works that are lengthy, like Double Blind. Still, just to get to a dollar reward is insane. I've not be able to review as much because of my eyesight. Still, this forum helps me, and the biggest blessing is to meet wonderful people like you. :))
I thought this was fresh and original, downright cheeky. Stay at it.
Sending you and Louise my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Thankyou sweetheart and do let me know when your next chapter comes up.
Comment from royowen
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I'm afraid that's the way of the site dear Geoffrey, but one of my fans got terribly upset that somebody wouldn't review her poem, because she hadn't hadn't put money on, but I try to do the right thing, well done bro, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Thanks mate for coming by. I have a poem about the time of year and the possibility of "Up- Over" not being around till September see what happens. I have not completed it yet.
reply by royowen on 01-Jul-2020
    Well done
Comment from Jina Sarma
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I am returning to this portal after a long time. I loved reading it. A good start of my day. The poem has a rhythm. A thought provoking poem. All the best keep writing poems.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Thanks Jina truth be known I am only still here because someone sponsored me to stay. Nice to meet you will look for your stuff.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Balloons in books, balloons in children laughter :" waste of phoney money is a book balloon.

I may as well forget them

As they make me look a goon

They are not cheap

And I lose sleep

Just waiting for some looks" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    Hi no contest on this one thanks for coming by.
reply by Iza Deleanu on 01-Jul-2020
    Ups sorry😉
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have no idea what a "book balloon" is? Are these just stories you post on Fanstory? People are rather fussy when it comes to reading stories, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2020
    A book Balloon is one of the options for promotion on FS. Thanks for being first cab off the rank you may have missed the rewards.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 01-Jul-2020
    I didn?t know that x