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NaPoWriMo 2020

Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "My Almanac Questionnaire"
Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission

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Comment from Joan E.
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This prompt appears far too challenging. Congratulations on persisting and posting your response. I enjoyed your storytelling and rhymes and hope to hear more about what happened near the Hollywood Sign! Sweet dreams- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written almanac poem. It seems to be an enormous challenge. The part you did was greatly done as you deserve a pat on the shoulder. I was not up for the challenge this year.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Hi Sandra! You're the best. And today is the final day. I'm glad it's over. I don't believe that I stuck to NaPoWriMo writing prompts. It was an awful experience. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for taking us along your dream-like travels based on your 5-minute answers to those questions! It sounds like you are a very good traveler and very creative. Was it during last year during this NaPoWriMo challenge that you were visiting Florida?

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
    Hi Helen! I was raised in NY and Florida. I love running around in South Florida. It use to be really redneck, but now it's just beach fun. Last year NaPoWriMo was a hectic Easter in the South. You remember... Lolz. You're the best. Thank you. Be blest. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
reply by lyenochka on 30-Apr-2020
    I was impressed that you were able to do the NaPo even with the difficulty getting wifi at the airport etc.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Alicia. I loved reading this interesting and fun poem. You took me on a fun journey. Like a fly on the wall I could join in on all of this. I enjoyed your author's note, too. Yes--what day is it? Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi Marilyn! I appreciate you reading and reviewing. It was truly an awful experience. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from samandlancelot
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Sunnilicious,

Even if this wasn't fun for you to write, it was fun to read. I felt like I was traveling with you through your adventures. And that Romeo, oh my, where is that going to lead?

I love your ending, to be continue, but I can't promise you.

Your frustration showed just a bit.

And took us for a driver (drive) up to the Hollywood sign.

Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi Patricia. I appreciate the edit note. I'll fix it. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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I found it quite inventive what you used out of all the Almanach answers. A lovely rhymed poem, summing up the different things that caught your attention and shaped the daily mood.
Well done!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi Marjon! You're very kind. You should try it. It's a creative cruncher. Thank you :)
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 29-Apr-2020
    Good idea.
Comment from January L'Angelle
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You did a fine job with the almanac stuff. I think that the readability is more important than anything. Can it be read easily? Yes! I especially liked: "As alligators hung around like pals.
It was far from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous"... I thought that this was rather good. It sounded like a Beatles song! I like it. Respectfully, -January L.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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Wow! Just lovely! You've written so well. I am totally in love with this piece. It seemed quite lengthy at first, but when I began reading, I didn't know when I finished. That's what a beautiful piece should do; to never bore the reader. Thumbs up! My very best wishes!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi! You're very kind. Thanks! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A unusual write Alicia to include a diverse question and answer session here and some magical images thrown in for good measure, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi Dolly! Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from tfawcus
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It certainly looks like a challenging assignment. Your imaginative approach gives the reader a kaleidoscopic impression with a dreamlike quality. Interesting!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
    Hi Tony! You're the best. Thank you :)