NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "My Almanac Questionnaire"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
10 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
This prompt appears far too challenging. Congratulations on persisting and posting your response. I enjoyed your storytelling and rhymes and hope to hear more about what happened near the Hollywood Sign! Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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This prompt appears far too challenging. Congratulations on persisting and posting your response. I enjoyed your storytelling and rhymes and hope to hear more about what happened near the Hollywood Sign! Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written almanac poem. It seems to be an enormous challenge. The part you did was greatly done as you deserve a pat on the shoulder. I was not up for the challenge this year.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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A very well-written almanac poem. It seems to be an enormous challenge. The part you did was greatly done as you deserve a pat on the shoulder. I was not up for the challenge this year.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra! You're the best. And today is the final day. I'm glad it's over. I don't believe that I stuck to NaPoWriMo writing prompts. It was an awful experience. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for taking us along your dream-like travels based on your 5-minute answers to those questions! It sounds like you are a very good traveler and very creative. Was it during last year during this NaPoWriMo challenge that you were visiting Florida?
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for taking us along your dream-like travels based on your 5-minute answers to those questions! It sounds like you are a very good traveler and very creative. Was it during last year during this NaPoWriMo challenge that you were visiting Florida?
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! I was raised in NY and Florida. I love running around in South Florida. It use to be really redneck, but now it's just beach fun. Last year NaPoWriMo was a hectic Easter in the South. You remember... Lolz. You're the best. Thank you. Be blest. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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I was impressed that you were able to do the NaPo even with the difficulty getting wifi at the airport etc.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. I loved reading this interesting and fun poem. You took me on a fun journey. Like a fly on the wall I could join in on all of this. I enjoyed your author's note, too. Yes--what day is it? Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. I loved reading this interesting and fun poem. You took me on a fun journey. Like a fly on the wall I could join in on all of this. I enjoyed your author's note, too. Yes--what day is it? Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Marilyn! I appreciate you reading and reviewing. It was truly an awful experience. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from samandlancelot
Sunnilicious,
Even if this wasn't fun for you to write, it was fun to read. I felt like I was traveling with you through your adventures. And that Romeo, oh my, where is that going to lead?
I love your ending, to be continue, but I can't promise you.
Your frustration showed just a bit.
And took us for a driver (drive) up to the Hollywood sign.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Sunnilicious,
Even if this wasn't fun for you to write, it was fun to read. I felt like I was traveling with you through your adventures. And that Romeo, oh my, where is that going to lead?
I love your ending, to be continue, but I can't promise you.
Your frustration showed just a bit.
And took us for a driver (drive) up to the Hollywood sign.
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Patricia. I appreciate the edit note. I'll fix it. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
I found it quite inventive what you used out of all the Almanach answers. A lovely rhymed poem, summing up the different things that caught your attention and shaped the daily mood.
Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I found it quite inventive what you used out of all the Almanach answers. A lovely rhymed poem, summing up the different things that caught your attention and shaped the daily mood.
Well done!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Marjon! You're very kind. You should try it. It's a creative cruncher. Thank you :)
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Good idea.
Comment from January L'Angelle
You did a fine job with the almanac stuff. I think that the readability is more important than anything. Can it be read easily? Yes! I especially liked: "As alligators hung around like pals.
It was far from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous"... I thought that this was rather good. It sounded like a Beatles song! I like it. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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You did a fine job with the almanac stuff. I think that the readability is more important than anything. Can it be read easily? Yes! I especially liked: "As alligators hung around like pals.
It was far from "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous"... I thought that this was rather good. It sounded like a Beatles song! I like it. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! Just lovely! You've written so well. I am totally in love with this piece. It seemed quite lengthy at first, but when I began reading, I didn't know when I finished. That's what a beautiful piece should do; to never bore the reader. Thumbs up! My very best wishes!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Wow! Just lovely! You've written so well. I am totally in love with this piece. It seemed quite lengthy at first, but when I began reading, I didn't know when I finished. That's what a beautiful piece should do; to never bore the reader. Thumbs up! My very best wishes!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi! You're very kind. Thanks! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A unusual write Alicia to include a diverse question and answer session here and some magical images thrown in for good measure, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A unusual write Alicia to include a diverse question and answer session here and some magical images thrown in for good measure, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Dolly! Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from tfawcus
It certainly looks like a challenging assignment. Your imaginative approach gives the reader a kaleidoscopic impression with a dreamlike quality. Interesting!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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It certainly looks like a challenging assignment. Your imaginative approach gives the reader a kaleidoscopic impression with a dreamlike quality. Interesting!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Hi Tony! You're the best. Thank you :)