A Wonderful Life
A Senryu Entry15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely post. Best of luck in the contest with this senryu. Curiosity and finding answers to things prompts us to keep interested in life. I question the cute little lizard though. He probably wants to eat those butterflies. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
This is a lovely post. Best of luck in the contest with this senryu. Curiosity and finding answers to things prompts us to keep interested in life. I question the cute little lizard though. He probably wants to eat those butterflies. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about the human mind that are always looking for something to stimulate the brain with curiosity and brings wonder to the curious mind.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
A very well-written Senryu about the human mind that are always looking for something to stimulate the brain with curiosity and brings wonder to the curious mind.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, A Wonderful Life, has the right set up and reminds us that there are still many things left unproven or unknown for all of us to discover.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
This senryu, A Wonderful Life, has the right set up and reminds us that there are still many things left unproven or unknown for all of us to discover.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
Write A Senryu writing prompt contest. It's a great topic and I like the presentation. Good syllable count. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the
Write A Senryu writing prompt contest. It's a great topic and I like the presentation. Good syllable count. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Minglement
Lovely presentation for this poignant entry for the senryu contest. You speak a valid truth. May none of us ever lose our sense of wonder and curiosity :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
Lovely presentation for this poignant entry for the senryu contest. You speak a valid truth. May none of us ever lose our sense of wonder and curiosity :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
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My pleasure! Take care :)
Comment from samandlancelot
Brilliant photo you've selected.
I love the sentiment in your poem. Be curious, don't stop exploring, your mind will grow in satisfying ways.
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
Brilliant photo you've selected.
I love the sentiment in your poem. Be curious, don't stop exploring, your mind will grow in satisfying ways.
Patricia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to adventure and the tenacity to explore our world and I enjoyed your few words that conjured up a picture of nature at its best, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
A fine tribute to adventure and the tenacity to explore our world and I enjoyed your few words that conjured up a picture of nature at its best, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this inspirational piece that conveys a message of undeniable truth. We must never stop learning till we die.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this inspirational piece that conveys a message of undeniable truth. We must never stop learning till we die.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a nice, short, and easy to read poem full of meaning. It is nice to be like children, always curious and always exploring. They learn, we find things to write about. .
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
This is a nice, short, and easy to read poem full of meaning. It is nice to be like children, always curious and always exploring. They learn, we find things to write about. .
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights!
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the message conveyed in it. We must continue to feed and water the garden of our mind with good things, keeping the weeds out. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
I like this and the message conveyed in it. We must continue to feed and water the garden of our mind with good things, keeping the weeds out. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights!