Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 77 "Mask In Space?"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Drew Delaney
This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines that follows the 3-6-9 syllable count. The first line has 3 syllables, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line 9 syllables. The subject can be anything.
You have only one stanza. You need two more to qualify.
Drew
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines that follows the 3-6-9 syllable count. The first line has 3 syllables, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line 9 syllables. The subject can be anything.
You have only one stanza. You need two more to qualify.
Drew
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Thank you! I completely confused the Contest Type. Please Review and Rate with Corrections!
Greatly Appreciate your Value Time to Read and Rate this poem offering.
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I redid! Best wishes!
Drew
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God Bless you- Thank you.
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You?re welcome!
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Blessings to you for the reconsideration!
Comment from samandlancelot
QC,
The 3-6-9 poem contest requires three stanzas and you only have one.
You have a fascinating picture and an interesting idea, it just needs two more stanzas.
Let me know if you fix this, and I'll raise your rating.
Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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QC,
The 3-6-9 poem contest requires three stanzas and you only have one.
You have a fascinating picture and an interesting idea, it just needs two more stanzas.
Let me know if you fix this, and I'll raise your rating.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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OMG,Thank you! I completely confused the Contest Type. Please Review and Rate with Corrections!
Greatly Appreciate your Value Time to Read and Rate this poem offering.
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Perfect! I love that the space rock considers attacking our planet, but not without its mask. I raised your rating to five stars.
Patricia