Poetic Treasures & Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Love Across the Miles"na-po-wri-mo contest
6 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You painted a great picture, Dove, with your well-written words in this poem. I can feel how much you miss your friend, but are thankful you can contact her by phone. Your rhymes and flow of lines are good. There is always that one special person like the one you mentioned. Thanks for sharing. Sty safe. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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You painted a great picture, Dove, with your well-written words in this poem. I can feel how much you miss your friend, but are thankful you can contact her by phone. Your rhymes and flow of lines are good. There is always that one special person like the one you mentioned. Thanks for sharing. Sty safe. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Jan, thanks for your compliments and empathy. and your review. Stay safe as well. Dove
Comment from samandlancelot
Dove Marie,
There is a nice connection with fellow writers here on Fanstory. So glad you have a favorite you can always count on, an answer to prayer, who always cares.
Very nice!
Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dove Marie,
There is a nice connection with fellow writers here on Fanstory. So glad you have a favorite you can always count on, an answer to prayer, who always cares.
Very nice!
Patricia
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear Patricia, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from January L'Angelle
It is so great to have wonderful friends. especially when you share the love of writing. I enjoyed this poem and thought it was very personal and gave me insight about you. Well penned. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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It is so great to have wonderful friends. especially when you share the love of writing. I enjoyed this poem and thought it was very personal and gave me insight about you. Well penned. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Dear January, Thanks for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is such a beautiful and well written poem from your great big heart. Thank you for writing this. It made my heart smile really big. You used great loving words and beautiful imagery. May God bless you and keep you safe! I will call you again soon! love, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Donna, This is such a beautiful and well written poem from your great big heart. Thank you for writing this. It made my heart smile really big. You used great loving words and beautiful imagery. May God bless you and keep you safe! I will call you again soon! love, Teri
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Dear Teri, Thanks so much for the exceptional rating. I hope to hear from you soon! Bless you, Donna
Comment from R56Ma3
The words go along with the picture and is very well structured. During tough times like this, when we can't meet in person, the contact is always a phone call away. Excellent!
R56ma3
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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The words go along with the picture and is very well structured. During tough times like this, when we can't meet in person, the contact is always a phone call away. Excellent!
R56ma3
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Dear R56ma3, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
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You're welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You spoke to your lovable friend who is a member of Fanstory you talked to her on phone and send your love across the miles and shared your thoughts and writing, posting; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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You spoke to your lovable friend who is a member of Fanstory you talked to her on phone and send your love across the miles and shared your thoughts and writing, posting; well said, well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2020
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove