Who Do You See?
a mirror poem19 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, Bill, this poem is really deep! There is a "you' that the individual sees and "you" that the world sees. Who is the real "you"?
Love this poem, Bill. Stay safe and healthy.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Wow, Bill, this poem is really deep! There is a "you' that the individual sees and "you" that the world sees. Who is the real "you"?
Love this poem, Bill. Stay safe and healthy.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you, Nan, for the enthusiastic review. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest poem. Your lines flow well with a great message. I like how you emphasized that one is influenced by what s/he sees and will make that decision herself/himself. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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I enjoyed your contest poem. Your lines flow well with a great message. I like how you emphasized that one is influenced by what s/he sees and will make that decision herself/himself. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, such philosophical insight of fraction and refraction like a split personality searching for the best identity. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Wow, such philosophical insight of fraction and refraction like a split personality searching for the best identity. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you, Iza. This came in third.
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there . A very poignant poem on reflection you wrote. Greatly descriptive..Very well written Mirror Mirror poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hi there . A very poignant poem on reflection you wrote. Greatly descriptive..Very well written Mirror Mirror poetry entry. Well done and best of luck. Lourens
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you, Lourens. It placed third.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image, Bill.
-I like your poem, too,
with two verses to go
with the two images.
-The first one introduces
looking at yourself,
followed by who has the say.
-I like the message at the end, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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-Good image, Bill.
-I like your poem, too,
with two verses to go
with the two images.
-The first one introduces
looking at yourself,
followed by who has the say.
-I like the message at the end, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thanks, Pam. Placed third.
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You are welcome, Bill, congrats on the 3rd place. I don't think you had a profile picture before:)
Comment from smileycloud
a very wise an much needed poem
your words speak a lot in so few
I often pray for people to sometimes stop even looking in mirrors
like youe poem says there are way too many intercessions and intrusions on the image we think we see
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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a very wise an much needed poem
your words speak a lot in so few
I often pray for people to sometimes stop even looking in mirrors
like youe poem says there are way too many intercessions and intrusions on the image we think we see
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, smileycloud
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Who Do You See?
Hello, my friend,
Lovely entry for the mirror mirror writing prompt contest. I like your free verse poem and presentation. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Who Do You See?
Hello, my friend,
Lovely entry for the mirror mirror writing prompt contest. I like your free verse poem and presentation. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write as what people see in us is not always our outer shell, but our inner glow and this can be reflected in the way we act, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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A poignant write as what people see in us is not always our outer shell, but our inner glow and this can be reflected in the way we act, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
A well written poem that show, or should I saw reflects, great wisdom. I am not an expert on physics; but, I wonder if "refraction" should have been "reflection". Just a thought - Jerry
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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A well written poem that show, or should I saw reflects, great wisdom. I am not an expert on physics; but, I wonder if "refraction" should have been "reflection". Just a thought - Jerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing, Jerome. Refraction refers to the bending of the light that, in this poetic format, means how one is perceived.
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Cool! I get it! Thanks - Jerry
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Very good mirror poem. Indeed, looking in the mirror can be a very furtive glance or a more philosophic introspection. We may find out things about ourselves that we were not even aware of.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Very good mirror poem. Indeed, looking in the mirror can be a very furtive glance or a more philosophic introspection. We may find out things about ourselves that we were not even aware of.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Thanks for giving this a look, Marjon
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