Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

Zanya,
Nice 5-7-5 poem. I love the photo, it fits your poem. I especially like the image "saffron streaks on twilight sky" paints in your work. I marvel at the twilight sky as viewed from my kitchen window with beautiful pink and yellow formations. Very good work. Best wishes. Have a nice Sunday.
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020

And thanks for reviewing and sharing zanya

reply by Cindy Decker on 28-Apr-2020

You?re welcome, Zanya. 😊

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your ability to capture both the rebirth of spring and the dark times we are experiencing in this 5-7-5. Your addition of alliteration and the "paints" imagery, along with your powerful title are very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020

Thanks for a most interesting review zanya

Comment from Victoria Grace

Excellent

I love the contrast of the beginning of the poem to the final line at the end. You do a great job grounding the reader from start to finish. I like how it resonated so well to the present situation. I hope you're staying healthy and safe. Thank you for sharingð?¥°

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the imagery.
-I like the personification of April
and the "saffron streaks of twilight sky."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Apr-2020

You are welcome, zanya.