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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Courage Doesn't Always Roar"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Tootie. This chapter is pretty serious for Commando. Taking an AK-47 round in the chest is pretty serious. It is serious enough to end his service but he pulled through.
There are still enemies today that use children just like they were used in VN. Evil doesn't change much over time.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hello Tootie. This chapter is pretty serious for Commando. Taking an AK-47 round in the chest is pretty serious. It is serious enough to end his service but he pulled through.
There are still enemies today that use children just like they were used in VN. Evil doesn't change much over time.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi Robert, Yes, although there is humor also in it, this chapter is pretty serious for Commando. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. As we've said before, your support means a lot to both of us. So glad you are continuing to follow along. Chapter 28 is in the works and will be posted soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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You're welcome.
Comment from damommy
This chapter has many great moments. It also has it share of sad moments. I like the inclusion of the lyrics to the 'Star Spangled Banner'. I like how the injury Bill received was resolved. When he was back on the battlefield, you wrote his thoughts well. I could tell he was trying to stay positive in light of the life or death dilemma. As always, the conversations back home with family are enlightening.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This chapter has many great moments. It also has it share of sad moments. I like the inclusion of the lyrics to the 'Star Spangled Banner'. I like how the injury Bill received was resolved. When he was back on the battlefield, you wrote his thoughts well. I could tell he was trying to stay positive in light of the life or death dilemma. As always, the conversations back home with family are enlightening.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi Yvonne, We first have to say that we love reading your daily jokes. They always bring a chuckle. Thank you for those, and thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. We appreciate you sharing the parts you like best. As we've said before, your continued support means so much to us. Chapter 28 will be coming soon, so stay tuned. Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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I'm glad to know someone's reading my jokes. Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If I had children walking toward me, and they had packs on their backs, smiling and waving, it would be very difficult to make a decision. (unless you know the situation). I'll wait until the next chapter to see what happens and see what your decision was. I hope they turn and walk the other way!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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If I had children walking toward me, and they had packs on their backs, smiling and waving, it would be very difficult to make a decision. (unless you know the situation). I'll wait until the next chapter to see what happens and see what your decision was. I hope they turn and walk the other way!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi Rosemary, As always, your continued support means so much to us. Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. Yes, it's such a difficult situation. You'll find out soon what happens next. Chapter 28 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from karenina
Another winning chapter. The beauty and pain of this is that we see the dichotomy of war. Of necessity we are there to achieve victory...and yet, as belov'ed as Bill has become throughout this saga here are innocent children who may well be adorable, unwitting weapons of death--anw how does a man deal with the split second decision he must make--and then live with the consequences for the rest of his life if combat training and instinct dictate he annihilate the children? I remember well the moral arguments tossed like bombs between protesters and supporters of our war effort... After all these years I've talked to Viet Nam Vets with haunted eyes who still, to this day, are haunted by what they saw and did there. Another six star chapter--and as ever, I will be anxious to read what happens here. --Karenina
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Another winning chapter. The beauty and pain of this is that we see the dichotomy of war. Of necessity we are there to achieve victory...and yet, as belov'ed as Bill has become throughout this saga here are innocent children who may well be adorable, unwitting weapons of death--anw how does a man deal with the split second decision he must make--and then live with the consequences for the rest of his life if combat training and instinct dictate he annihilate the children? I remember well the moral arguments tossed like bombs between protesters and supporters of our war effort... After all these years I've talked to Viet Nam Vets with haunted eyes who still, to this day, are haunted by what they saw and did there. Another six star chapter--and as ever, I will be anxious to read what happens here. --Karenina
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi karenina, WOW! What an AWESOME review, and we love the shiny six stars. THANK YOU! A double "SALUTE!" Your continued support means a lot to both of us. Your comments are very well said and, unfortunately, so true. Chapter 28 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Always my true pleasure to read you! Can't wait for the next chapter!--Karenina
Comment from Teri7
This is another very good chapter you two have written. You used very good descriptive words and very good country dialogue. Always interesting to read. I didn't see any spag or errors. May God bless you both. teri
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This is another very good chapter you two have written. You used very good descriptive words and very good country dialogue. Always interesting to read. I didn't see any spag or errors. May God bless you both. teri
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi Teri, So glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing it. We really appreciate the continued support. Love how you pointed out the "good country dialogue." Chapter 28 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend ahead. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Makahla J
Cathy and Bill, what a great plot! This is my first time reading your work in this story but even still, I can sense the overall direction of the story. A story of war and tragedy in the midst of birth and new life is always a great one. When Billy said, "In order to do so, I shall cover my heart with callouses to protect it from breaking as I walk among the dead with my head hung low. No one will ever truly know why God allows this." The weight of war and mental illness during an era when it would be seen as a weakness really brings light to the mental and physical state of men in the Vietnam war, who may have left unscathed physically but remained vulnerable emotionally and mentally. I truly enjoyed your work. My only critique would be to try and make the breaks a bit smoother. Some of your transitions seemed forced. At times I wasn't sure if Billy was reliving a memory or speaking directly to someone. But overall, nice read!
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reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Cathy and Bill, what a great plot! This is my first time reading your work in this story but even still, I can sense the overall direction of the story. A story of war and tragedy in the midst of birth and new life is always a great one. When Billy said, "In order to do so, I shall cover my heart with callouses to protect it from breaking as I walk among the dead with my head hung low. No one will ever truly know why God allows this." The weight of war and mental illness during an era when it would be seen as a weakness really brings light to the mental and physical state of men in the Vietnam war, who may have left unscathed physically but remained vulnerable emotionally and mentally. I truly enjoyed your work. My only critique would be to try and make the breaks a bit smoother. Some of your transitions seemed forced. At times I wasn't sure if Billy was reliving a memory or speaking directly to someone. But overall, nice read!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Hi Makahla,
Thank you for stopping by to read and review this chapter. We're glad you enjoyed it, and think if you had read past chapters, you would understand the style and it would flow better for you. We encourage you to do so, and we hope you will also continue to follow along. Chapter 28 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Commando
A "SALUTE," Co-author! Absolutely the best chapter yet. Why? BECAUSE OF YOUR WRITING EXPERTISE . . . that's why. Writing at your side is an "HONOR!" You are the "BEST!" Respectfully with Admiration and "16 Tons of Love," Bill
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Co-author! Absolutely the best chapter yet. Why? BECAUSE OF YOUR WRITING EXPERTISE . . . that's why. Writing at your side is an "HONOR!" You are the "BEST!" Respectfully with Admiration and "16 Tons of Love," Bill
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Hi Co-Author! WOW! How much do I pay you for those kind words, huh? You know, someday your creativity, natural talent, and dedication to writing is hopefully gonna rub off on me! The HONOR is all mine to write by your side, and I hope to for the rest of my life. You are the one who is the BEST...and I'm doing my best to try to keep up with you! A BIG "SALUTE" back atcha that's filled with lots of gratitude. God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration and "711 Tons of Love," Cathy
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"Hurrah! The church bells are ringin' for our wedding. What's a matter? Are you sleepin' in?"
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I'm not sleepin', and I even sent you the money to buy them shoes, so hurry on up and get a move on! Grandma's impatiently waitin' with her broom so we can jump over it, but be careful 'cause if you act up, you know what else she'll do....WHOMP!
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AWESOME . . . "I Love It!"
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This is delightful, despite its somber scenario. The snappy banter is priceless and the description of the quick-acting injection--and its unfortunate placement!--is so fresh and clever. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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This is delightful, despite its somber scenario. The snappy banter is priceless and the description of the quick-acting injection--and its unfortunate placement!--is so fresh and clever. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
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Hi Liz, Love how you say it is "so fresh and clever." HURRAH! We're glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing it. Thank you also for the continued support. Chapter 28 is already in the works and is right around the corner. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Cathy and Bill,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with flavor of humor at several places; the entry of the little boy and the girl in the end is working as a HOOK - worth following strategy.
Francis Scott Key's last 4 lines + the conversation of Viet Doctor and Bill, particularly this dialogue, are noteworthy:
"Within a couple of days or so. I'll let you know. However, if you ever call me a 'silly gander' again, then you'll be here forever!"
I'm waiting for Chapter 28.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hello Cathy and Bill,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with flavor of humor at several places; the entry of the little boy and the girl in the end is working as a HOOK - worth following strategy.
Francis Scott Key's last 4 lines + the conversation of Viet Doctor and Bill, particularly this dialogue, are noteworthy:
"Within a couple of days or so. I'll let you know. However, if you ever call me a 'silly gander' again, then you'll be here forever!"
I'm waiting for Chapter 28.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hi RP! HURRAH! You are AWESOME! Thank you SO MUCH for the shiny six star rating and review. Your continued support means so much to both of us. Another double "SALUTE" for you! We really appreciate the continued support, as well as you pointing out your favorite parts. Chapter 28 is already in the works, so it's right around the corner! Be well and happy. Wishing you a wonderful week. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Cathy & Bill, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ulla
Hi you two. It's a very good continuation to the story and it goes through some horrible decisions that has to be taken in any war. But it doesn't make it any more easy. Now what? All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hi you two. It's a very good continuation to the story and it goes through some horrible decisions that has to be taken in any war. But it doesn't make it any more easy. Now what? All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Hi Ulla! So glad you enjoyed this new chapter. HURRAH! Thanks so much for the review and continued support. What's next? Well, we're already at work on that so Chapter 28 is right around the corner! Best wishes and God bless. Take care.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy