On a Brisk Autumn Morn
Ode to Autumn 5-7-5 Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from DragonSkulls
HAHAHA. Finally, a piece that goes off the norm. Thank you for the great chuckle this morning. I needed it. I hope you do great in the booth because this is right up my alley humor wise. Hahaha. Too Funny. Perfect picture. Best of luck, author.
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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HAHAHA. Finally, a piece that goes off the norm. Thank you for the great chuckle this morning. I needed it. I hope you do great in the booth because this is right up my alley humor wise. Hahaha. Too Funny. Perfect picture. Best of luck, author.
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Mr. Skulls. Glad you got a chuckle out of this. Much appreciated!
Comment from Shel Bee
Good oneš???especially with the photo. I notice its a 4-7-4 format instead of 5-7-5 plus omitting the word autumn. Adding the additional words would could make it pop even moreš???
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Good oneš???especially with the photo. I notice its a 4-7-4 format instead of 5-7-5 plus omitting the word autumn. Adding the additional words would could make it pop even moreš???
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you Shel Bee. This is a 5-7-5 syllable post. You are right, I did not catch that you need the word 'autumn' in this. I will go change this right now. Thank you sooooo much for pointing this out to me. Much appreciated!
Comment from humpwhistle
If we're honest, I'll bet we all would have to admit to harboring similar thoughts. Well maybe not ski lodge operators, and their misguided clientele. Living, as I do, in leaf-peepers' heaven, I still view the day the first leaf turns as the first day of winter.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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If we're honest, I'll bet we all would have to admit to harboring similar thoughts. Well maybe not ski lodge operators, and their misguided clientele. Living, as I do, in leaf-peepers' heaven, I still view the day the first leaf turns as the first day of winter.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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LOL! Thank you, Lee, for this hilarious review. I moved to Florida to get away from the northern Illinois winters. I appreciate all those stars. I just wanted to enter something silly. And different. Thank you again.
