Seasonal Salutation
Dominance flows easily from one season to the next...14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Seasonal Situation, has the right set up and notes that the change in seasons required that leaves fall along with the temperatures.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Seasonal Situation, has the right set up and notes that the change in seasons required that leaves fall along with the temperatures.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Thanx, Bill for your review on this shortie -- they are definitely the ones that I have time for..... EIGHT days til grade reports - and 'school summer' begins! ;) :) LOL! ;) Yvette
Comment from Alchera
A beautifully written senryu. Perfectly set within its structural syllables counting format 5/7/5 and its beautifully narrative story lined content that includes fixing the obliged word "autumn" in its first line. indeed! I did like it! Best wishes for the contest.Great work and Chapeau! I ran out of six.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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A beautifully written senryu. Perfectly set within its structural syllables counting format 5/7/5 and its beautifully narrative story lined content that includes fixing the obliged word "autumn" in its first line. indeed! I did like it! Best wishes for the contest.Great work and Chapeau! I ran out of six.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
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Oh, Tony, no worries on the six, sir -- just so good to hear from you!! ;) Thanx so much for the wonderful review this morning, and you have a spectacular week!! ;) Yvette
Comment from smileycloud
lovely 5/7/5 Haiku of nature
your word imagery is very powerful and strong
even though the pictured image is beautiful and is a compliment to your work;- your poem is very picturesque and imaginative for the reader standing alone
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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lovely 5/7/5 Haiku of nature
your word imagery is very powerful and strong
even though the pictured image is beautiful and is a compliment to your work;- your poem is very picturesque and imaginative for the reader standing alone
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!!😀😆😉
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like the message conveyed in this. I also love how superbly you've worded the entrance of autumn and the exit of summer. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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I really like the message conveyed in this. I also love how superbly you've worded the entrance of autumn and the exit of summer. This is good work and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you!🌞
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine autumn poem here and it is hard thinking of autumn when we are in spring as autumn is not my favourite month, you certainly brought the chill in the air here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A fine autumn poem here and it is hard thinking of autumn when we are in spring as autumn is not my favourite month, you certainly brought the chill in the air here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you! 🌞
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a beautiful ode to autumn. All the colours are there, in the falling leaves and the font of the poem. I also like very much the description of loss of warmth - not an event often expressed.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful ode to autumn. All the colours are there, in the falling leaves and the font of the poem. I also like very much the description of loss of warmth - not an event often expressed.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines is fine.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
A fine entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt. Nice presentation. Good topic for Autumn. The grammatical connection between lines is fine.
Well done. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from dovemarie
Dear author, your words "rises" and "falls": are good verbs to use in commenting on the season of autumn. I liked the yellow leaves in your picture too. Good luck in the contest. Dove
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Dear author, your words "rises" and "falls": are good verbs to use in commenting on the season of autumn. I liked the yellow leaves in your picture too. Good luck in the contest. Dove
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review!🌞
Comment from royowen
And I thought it was spring coming up in the Northern hemisphere. But it certainly is Autumn here, this is an amazing ode to leaf peeping season, well done, an excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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And I thought it was spring coming up in the Northern hemisphere. But it certainly is Autumn here, this is an amazing ode to leaf peeping season, well done, an excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review!🌞
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to autumn poem. When the leaves start to fall autumn rises and summer step aside to make the earth ready for winter's cold and snow.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 ode to autumn poem. When the leaves start to fall autumn rises and summer step aside to make the earth ready for winter's cold and snow.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review!🌞