Awesome Aerosaltant
Bee sure to catch his performance this Spring44 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry having IMPRESSIVE phraseology, ENCHANTING flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
Particularly Noteworthy Points are:
1. Good Alliteration as 'Amazing aeronaut; dude does etc.
2. 3rd Stanza + "Sweet as honey...sting!"
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
[ It deserves to be honored with 5 Stars + ...,but Alas! ]
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry having IMPRESSIVE phraseology, ENCHANTING flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting its theme.
Particularly Noteworthy Points are:
1. Good Alliteration as 'Amazing aeronaut; dude does etc.
2. 3rd Stanza + "Sweet as honey...sting!"
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Superb!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
[ It deserves to be honored with 5 Stars + ...,but Alas! ]
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!!
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Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Lance S. Loria
He's a cheeky bloke. Your description of the bee is awesome. The tale you spin was fun to read even though the bee has no tail. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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He's a cheeky bloke. Your description of the bee is awesome. The tale you spin was fun to read even though the bee has no tail. Good luck in the contest. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from smileycloud
good morning Mrs/Mrs/miss blind
a lovely poem with fine 8 syllable meter;-
"2nd line...3rd stanza = 7 syllables"?
it flows beautifully with exact and near rhyme which works very well indeed
the word imagery is amazing
your Bee was buzzing and playing around the entire time I was reading
well done
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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good morning Mrs/Mrs/miss blind
a lovely poem with fine 8 syllable meter;-
"2nd line...3rd stanza = 7 syllables"?
it flows beautifully with exact and near rhyme which works very well indeed
the word imagery is amazing
your Bee was buzzing and playing around the entire time I was reading
well done
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a nicely written sonnet like poem about the bee. I don't think the sound of violin playing can rise and fall. You supply both the postives and negatives about the bee.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy.,
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This is a nicely written sonnet like poem about the bee. I don't think the sound of violin playing can rise and fall. You supply both the postives and negatives about the bee.
Good luck with the prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy.,
dragonpoet
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
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You're welcome and you too.
dp
Comment from joycetreasures
This is an excellent poem about Bee's performance. He's all over the place with his flying and hoovering everywhere. His wings are magnificent in flight like a Beethoven quartet. I like how you shared his main goal is the pollen yet his flight is remarkable. Awesome last line, that his life is about his sting. This is a cute poem about the bee. Your imagery is so fitting for your poem. This Awesome Aerosaltant is brilliant in flight. Great poem and your sentence flow is really good. I love your header, "Bee sure to catch his performance this Spring." A bee that does more than fly. Nice. Good job. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This is an excellent poem about Bee's performance. He's all over the place with his flying and hoovering everywhere. His wings are magnificent in flight like a Beethoven quartet. I like how you shared his main goal is the pollen yet his flight is remarkable. Awesome last line, that his life is about his sting. This is a cute poem about the bee. Your imagery is so fitting for your poem. This Awesome Aerosaltant is brilliant in flight. Great poem and your sentence flow is really good. I love your header, "Bee sure to catch his performance this Spring." A bee that does more than fly. Nice. Good job. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
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You are welcome. Be Blessed:-)
Comment from Franklin Dillard
This poem is wonderful. It makes us appreciate all the things that God created. Too many times we go our merry way concerned about ourselves.
I would give you six stars, but I only have five.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This poem is wonderful. It makes us appreciate all the things that God created. Too many times we go our merry way concerned about ourselves.
I would give you six stars, but I only have five.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Your virtual-6 is awesome, Franklin - thank you so much! 🤩 Have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Awesome Aerosaltant
Hello my friend
I enjoyed your poem. The presentation is beautiful. You described what bees do very well. Good job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Awesome Aerosaltant
Hello my friend
I enjoyed your poem. The presentation is beautiful. You described what bees do very well. Good job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeyoutiful weekend!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. Bees certainly very important to our existence. The one that amazes me tis the bumble bee. How does that thing fly with tiny wings and a huge body. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer. Bees certainly very important to our existence. The one that amazes me tis the bumble bee. How does that thing fly with tiny wings and a huge body. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeeyoutiful weekend!
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You're welcome... You do the same.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very cleverly written poem. You've described the antics of this bee well. I like your rhyme and flow and your choice of words. This is a great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This is a very cleverly written poem. You've described the antics of this bee well. I like your rhyme and flow and your choice of words. This is a great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeyoutiful weekend!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed, vividly descriptive, and
entertaining. The comparison of the performer and the industrious bee is
excellent.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Your poem is skillfully and creatively composed, vividly descriptive, and
entertaining. The comparison of the performer and the industrious bee is
excellent.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you and have a beeyoutiful weekend!!
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:-)
